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Abstract
This study deals with the American Civil War 1861 – 1865. The study investigates the possible causes to the war, its progress and the post-war period. The study also contains an analysis and interpretation of the third part of Gone with the Wind by Margeret Mitchell, with special reference to Scarlett O’Hara’s development throughout the story and the picture that is drawn of the Southern states. At last the study deals with an evaluation of the consequences of the war, also consisting of the consequences that are being expressed in Gone with the wind, some enclosed sources and self-imposed material. Many causes have had influence on the outbreak of the four-year-long war and after the ending of the war many consequences appears. The novel Gone with the Wind is about a young girl named Scarlett and her struggles thru the war. In the story she goes thru some personal changes and because the novel is writing in a southern point of view, it is a very positive picture we get of the south. The war had had many consequences to regular people living in the southern states, both mentally and physically, which is shown in the novel and three further sources.
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21. december 2011 af Stygotius (Slettet)
This study deals with the American Civil War 1861 – 1865. The study investigates the possible causes to the war, its progress and the post-war period. The study also contains an analysis and interpretation of the third part of Gone with the Wind by Marg(e)aret Mitchell, with special reference to Scarlett O’Hara’s development throughout the story and the picture that is drawn of the (S)southern states. (At last) In conclusion the study (deals with an evaluation of) attempts to assess the consequences of the war, (also consisting of the consequences that are being) as expressed in Gone with the (w)Wind, (some enclosed) other sources and some added (self-imposed) material. Many (causes) factors have (had influence on) influenced the outbreak of the four-year-long war and (after the ending of the war many) its conclusion brought about many dire consequences (appears). The novel Gone with the Wind is about a young girl named Scarlett and her struggle(s thru) during the war. In the story she goes (thru) through some personal changes and because the novel is (writing in) written from a southern point of view, (it is) the reader is presented with a very positive (picture we get) view of the (s)South. The war had had many consequences to (regular) ordinary (people living in the southern states) southerners, both mentally and physically, (which) and this is shown in the novel and also in three (further) other sources.
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