Hjælp til engelsk aflevering. (rettelse)

Det her er min engelsk aflevering :)`. Tænkte på om der var nogen der gad at rette min engelsk aflevering :). I må godt fortælle mig hvad jeg laver fejl, og evt fortælle mig hvad jeg kan øve mig på. Som i kan se er jeg ikke særlig god til at bruge varieret ord, og mit ordforråd i engelsk er rigtig dårligt:)!. 

Men tak for i tog jer tid. Håber der er en venlig sjæl der gider at rette den. 

In America
"in god we trust"

United States of America,  is known as one of the most powerful and rich country in the world. It has one of the biggest economy in the world, and is built on its good values such as justice, democracy, and freedom. USA represent opportunity, ideal of freedom what is Americas most wonderful property.
Americans always fight for what is right, and being able to speak our minds without being persecuted. My perception have been, that they always fight for freedom. Not only for themselves, but also the countries who need the help.
America is a country with a lot of poverty, but also a country with a huge population of richer families. Its not like Denmark. You don't get the necessary help.  

A thing that makes America take distance from all other countries, is the rights that an American citizen has in America. American citizens probably have more rights, than the citizens from any other country. One of the bad things in USA is the gun legislation. It Is out of control,  a unstable person may go into a store and buy a gun. There are more people killed in the USA by guns, than in many other countrys. I can't believe how the people can have the feeling of security, with deadly guns at home. The American people do not tolerate everything. Americans live by the laws of the land and when the laws are broken, they must find a meaning to keep ourselves safe.
I have no doubt about USA is one of the best countries in the world. US have it all. Freedom, dreams - like Martin luther king, "I have a dream".