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hejsa alle sammen.
 

jeg har fået besked på at lave en skolebrev til en virksomhed der hedder " Shell livewire " det går ud på, at jeg skal bede dem om at deltage i en slags "jobdag" som Manchester College arrangerer.
 

her er brevet:

Manchester Technical College.
Greencourts
266 Styal Road Manchester M22 SLG

To: Shell Livewire, Hawthorne House, Forth Banks, Newcastle upon Tyne, NEI 3SG 
From: Manchester Technical College
Date: 26 February 2012
Subject: participate at the job day on Manchester Technical College. 
Hallo.
We would like to see Shell Livewire 26 February 2012 in Manchester Technical College.

Manchester Technical Collage has arranged each year a job day for all the leavers. We have invited a variety of branches and businesses to tell about the job opportunities in the field of their own area. The object about the job day is to get young people interested to start their own business.

We have read The Sunday Times and saw the excellent work Shell Livewire did for young entrepreneurs and we would be so gladly to invite Shell Livewire to participate at the job day in Manchester Technical College. We expect Shall Livewire to talk about job opportunities in your area and we would be so pleased if you could get one of yours most successfully entrepreneur to take a part at the job day.

We look forward to hearing from you and hope to see you at the Manchester Technical College 26 February 2012.
Signature: Liva Nielsen

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