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Engelsk rettelse

11. august 2005 af rizza (Slettet)
Er der nogen der gider at rette nedenstående (en halv side i word):

England is an island off the west coast of the European mainland. It is part of the United Kingdom, along with Scotland and Wales, and it has a population on 58 million people. The capital is London, which also is one of the largest cities, among Liverpool, Birmingham, Manchester and Nottingham. England still maintains a monarchy, with the Queen of England, Elizabeth.
England has many areas of historical interest. The Queen and the Royal Family are a well known international symbol of England. The Buckingham Palace, where the Queen lives, and the changing of the guards in front of the palace, are two popular tourist attractions. There are many other tourist attractions, for instance London Bridge, The Tower Bridge, Big Ben and the Saint Pauls Cathedral, not forgetting there red double-decker busses.
Britain was one of the first major world powers. British explorers discovered and colonized many parts of the world, including parts of North America. Britain was also one of the first industrial centers.
In spite of the fact, that I never have been in London, or England, for that matter, I really would like to visit the great country. I really don’t know much about the culture, but I would love to know more, and the fact that I can communicate with the inhabitants in a language I know well, unlike for instant German, would make it more interesting to learn. I think the historical background is very interesting, and the language is exciting, because almost half of the world’s population, know this language in some way. As I visited Malawi 2 years ago, I paid a visit to a small village school. We went inside the classroom, and 30 young children, in the age 6-18 were seated on the cold concrete floor, learning English. It was very fascinating. They actually spoke English very well.
I just can’t seem to understand why most Germans and Italians can’t speak the language, when the most poor parts of the world are able to. I know they all gets the classes, but it seems to me that they are not interested in learning the language. Like the do not want to accept English as the world international language. I think they may be fighting for there own language to become it. But I think the fact is, that English is the easiest language to learn all over the world. But if we should listening to Germany, Mandarin is actually the biggest principal language in the world, so maybe it would be most fair to learn this language in the future.

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11. august 2005 af Waterhouse (Slettet)

Har smidt forslag til rettelser ind i paranteser umiddelbart efter fejlen.

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England is an island off the west coast of the European mainland (eller continent?).

It is part of the United Kingdom, along with Scotland and Wales, and it has a population on (nej, brug "of") 58 million people.

The capital is London, which also is (byt om på is og also) one of the largest cities, among (along with) Liverpool, Birmingham, Manchester and Nottingham.

England still maintains a monarchy, with the Queen of England, Elizabeth.

England has many areas of historical interest. The Queen and the Royal Family are a well known international symbol of England. (Brug flertal - "...Family are well known symbols...").

The Buckingham Palace, where the Queen lives, and the changing of the guards in front of the palace, are two popular tourist attractions. There are many other tourist attractions, for instance London Bridge, The Tower Bridge, Big Ben and the Saint Pauls Cathedral, not forgetting there red double-decker busses.
Britain was one of the first major world powers. British explorers discovered and colonized many parts of the world, including parts of North America. Britain was also one of the first industrial centers.

In spite of the fact, that (aldrig komma foran that) I never have been in London, or England, for that matter, I really would like to visit the great country.

I really don’t know much about the culture, but I would love to know more, and the fact that I can communicate with the inhabitants in a language I know well, unlike for instant (instance) German, would make it more interesting to learn. I think the historical background is very interesting, and the language is exciting, because almost half of the world’s population, know this language in some way. As I visited Malawi 2 years ago, I paid a visit to a small village school. We went inside the classroom, and 30 young children, in the age 6-18 were seated on the cold concrete floor, learning English. It was very fascinating. They actually spoke English very well.

I just can’t seem to understand why most Germans and Italians can’t speak the language, when the most poor parts of the world are able to. I know they all gets (nej, get - det er flertal) the classes, but it seems to me that they are not interested in learning the language. Like they do not want to accept English as the world international language. I think they may be fighting for there (nej, their) own language to become it. But I think the fact is that English is the easiest language to learn all over the world. But if we should listening to Germany, Mandarin is actually the biggest principal language in the world, so maybe it would be most fair to learn this language in the future.

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11. august 2005 af Waterhouse (Slettet)

Og vil Studieportalen så ikke snart få et system, så man kan formatere sin tekst? Ville gøre det nok så meget mere overskueligt at rette tekster o.l hvis man kunne lave lidt kursiv af og til.

’ er selvf. apostroffer.

Svar #3
11. august 2005 af rizza (Slettet)

Tusinde tak for hjælpen!!!

Svar #4
11. august 2005 af rizza (Slettet)

Er denne sætning rigtig:
Britain was also one of the first industrial centers.
Min computer sætter nemlig en rød streg under centers, så tænkte på om det skulle være Centre

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Svar #5
11. august 2005 af Waterhouse (Slettet)

Jep, på engelsk hedder det centre i stedet for center.

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