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I can still remember the first impression her old friends here back in Denmark got, when she moved. Even though it was in 2045, and many people at that time moved to different countries, it still came as a shock. We all knew that Denmark wasn’t big enough for her, and we hoped she stayed even though we knew she wouldn’t. Though I didn’t like the thought of her staying in America, I still felt that it was the right thing for her.

My dear grandchild what I’m trying to say in this letter is, that life is full of chances, bad and good ones. Your mother took a chance, one who changed everything. I’m proud of her. I’m proud that she had the courage, the courage I hadn’t. I’m happy you’re from 2065 and not 1996. You’re not going through cancer or any other dis-eases as me. You have more options now. Don’t disappoint me. Take chances, live your life - you only have one. My dear grandchild I love you.
 

Tak!