Rettelse af to korte tekster ! :))

Jeg synes det meget godt det du har skrevet, og det er kun MEGET få og enkle ting jeg vil rette/omskrive.

After returning home to London, she does not wear the boots for six months, until her friend Spencer (who talked her into buying them in the first place) visits London and the meet up.

She feels the guilt of spending that much money on a pair of boots, even if they were on sale.

When Spencer comes to London for a visit, and she is meeting him in at a restaurant (kig lige på sidste sætning igen). 

They end up having a good time and it all (eller everything) seems perfect.

She feels lucky having a rich, beautiful and stylish boyfriends (tror bare det var en stavefejl, men s'et skal fjernes til sidst).

Bare nogle ting jeg personligt synes lød bedre :)

Mange tak :)

Men det jeg ønskede var andre formuleringer som måske kunne lyde bedre end dem jeg brugte, end grammatiske rettelser...

Text 1:
The story begins at Barneys department store in New York. A young British woman is trying out (an expensive pair of) a pair of expensive Manolos boots, and (trying to decide) considering whether or not to buy them. In the end she does.
After returning home to London(,) she does not wear the boots for six months, (till) but only when her friend Spencer (who talked her into buying them in the first place) visits London and they meet up. At the restaurant  where she (attends with) meets Spencer, she notices a dashing young man standing (alone) all by himself. They start talking and end up forming a (more) meaningful relationship.
After a (while) period of dating he asks her to marry him(, at f). First she says yes but (after) when he criticizes her boots, she sees flaws in him and ends the relationship.

Text 2:
At the beginning of the story the young British woman,  Lulu,  is in New York on a 4 day trip which she is blowing two months of rent money on?????. One afternoon after drinking too much alcohol at lunch, she finds herself falling in love with a(n expensive) pair of  expensive boots. She describes (how) the way they make her feel thinner, richer and even more intelligent. Although she (is) considers(ing) leaving without the boots (after hearing from) her friends telling her how good she looks(, she) makes her decide(s) to buy them. (For the next six months s)She doesn't, however, wear them during the next six months. She feels (the guilt of) guilty spending (that) so much money on a pair of boots, even (if they were) on sale.

When Spencer comes to London (for a visit,) to see her (and she is meeting) she meets him in (at) a restaurant(,). she contemplates what to wear (with) to match her boots, deciding on the basis of which area of England it is.?????
At the restaurant she notices a handsome young man standing alone in (the) a corner, and as she gets up to go to the bathroom she notices him checking her out. With her newly found confidence, (which she gives) due to  the boots (credit for), she walks over to him.

They end up having a good time and (all) everything seems perfect. She feels lucky having a rich, beautiful and stylish boyfriend(s). In (this love spell she is currently under,) her infatuation she calls Spencer to tell him all about her new love????, but his reaction is not what she expected. He tells her that Charlie might not be the right one for her, but she brushes it off as jealousy on his part.

(After) When Charlie proposes to her(,) she can't help (but) remembering (of) what Spencer said. Even though this (guy) chap / fellow / man seems perfect(, after he criticzes her boots) she (finally) reali(z)ses that this man isn't right for her since he criticised her boots(, h). His lifestyle and (goal) aim in life (is not similar to her own,) are not hers so she starts walking away.

Mange tak, for alle de rettelser :-)

Kan du også hjælpe mig med den anden inlæg jeg har med en "anden formulering" til en slutning af en tekst.

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