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Rettelse af engelsk summary "Danes"
18. september 2003 af
SP anonym (Slettet)
Hej. Jeg skal aflevere dette "summary" af en dansk tekst imorgen, så hvis du har tid til at se efter sproglige fejl, ville det være dejligt.
Rune
Danes like Denmark. They think that Denmark has the best welfare system in the world. However an opinion poll made among foreigners from rich, industrialised countries shows that the fewest people come to Denmark because of the country. They come because they have fallen in love with a Dane.
34-year old Masahide Nomura from Japan and 62-year old Nancy Canon from USA have come to Denmark because they have fallen in love and not because of the country. The 30-year old Swede Andrea Creutz moved because she wanted to admit to the Art Academy in Copenhagen. “I had a romantic idea about Denmark,” she says. When she came to Copenhagen 7 years ago it was more continental than Stockholm but now Stockholm is taking over, she says.
Masahide Nomura has never had any romantic ideas about Denmark. Until he met his Danish wife 10 years ago he did not know Denmark. He thinks the reason is missing information about Denmark and from his job in a Danish travel agency he has experienced that the last destination the young tourists want to visit is Copenhagen. It is to boring and not cool.
Nancy did also become disappointed when she moved to Denmark 25 years ago with her at that time Danish husband. The first letter she wrote from Denmark said, “there is no skyline…. And they call that a city” But now she disagrees “Copenhagen is the most incredible city. It is small and compact” She also throws into relief that Copenhagen is a safe city for her as a single mother. Her two children have also had a good time in Denmark and her son has had the possibility of choosing any education he wanted.
Masahide does also like his life in Denmark. He likes the short working hours compared to the working time in London and Tokyo, where he is born.
Rune
Danes like Denmark. They think that Denmark has the best welfare system in the world. However an opinion poll made among foreigners from rich, industrialised countries shows that the fewest people come to Denmark because of the country. They come because they have fallen in love with a Dane.
34-year old Masahide Nomura from Japan and 62-year old Nancy Canon from USA have come to Denmark because they have fallen in love and not because of the country. The 30-year old Swede Andrea Creutz moved because she wanted to admit to the Art Academy in Copenhagen. “I had a romantic idea about Denmark,” she says. When she came to Copenhagen 7 years ago it was more continental than Stockholm but now Stockholm is taking over, she says.
Masahide Nomura has never had any romantic ideas about Denmark. Until he met his Danish wife 10 years ago he did not know Denmark. He thinks the reason is missing information about Denmark and from his job in a Danish travel agency he has experienced that the last destination the young tourists want to visit is Copenhagen. It is to boring and not cool.
Nancy did also become disappointed when she moved to Denmark 25 years ago with her at that time Danish husband. The first letter she wrote from Denmark said, “there is no skyline…. And they call that a city” But now she disagrees “Copenhagen is the most incredible city. It is small and compact” She also throws into relief that Copenhagen is a safe city for her as a single mother. Her two children have also had a good time in Denmark and her son has had the possibility of choosing any education he wanted.
Masahide does also like his life in Denmark. He likes the short working hours compared to the working time in London and Tokyo, where he is born.
Svar #1
18. september 2003 af Katrine (Slettet)
Andrea Creutz moved because.. Nu kender jeg ikke den danske tekst, men der kunne godt proppes et there eller to the country ind.
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He did not know Denmark.. know about, had no knowledge of, have heard about..
It is to boring.. It is too boring
Nancy did also become.. Lyder måske lidt bedre med Nancy also became..
She throws into relief.. Hmmmmm... kan bare være, at jeg har et får lille ordforråd, men jeg synes, at det lyder mærkeligt. Nevermind..
where he is born.. normalt siger man where he was born.
Ellers rigtig god oversættelse, jeg kunne bestemt ikke have gjort det ligeså godt :)
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He did not know Denmark.. know about, had no knowledge of, have heard about..
It is to boring.. It is too boring
Nancy did also become.. Lyder måske lidt bedre med Nancy also became..
She throws into relief.. Hmmmmm... kan bare være, at jeg har et får lille ordforråd, men jeg synes, at det lyder mærkeligt. Nevermind..
where he is born.. normalt siger man where he was born.
Ellers rigtig god oversættelse, jeg kunne bestemt ikke have gjort det ligeså godt :)
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