Lille tekst på Engelsk

Goddag!

Jeg har en tekst på Engelsk og vil meget gerne høre om der er nogen der er nogen der ville være MEGA søde og se om der er flere fejl??

Altså vi fik en tekst med masser af fejl, og vil skulle rette den.

Jeg har rettet den således:

MY SUMMER CAMP:

When it was the third day, should Karen, I and the other 6 girls meet in our cabin. Sheila and Ida had a surprise to us. When we all wear there after breakfask and there was paddle, all of us got a papir. On the papir there was many numbers, and Sheila saying: If you can find a system in all og the numbers, you vil win aone or two good gift from Ida and me. You can work together  in pairs. Karen and i was together. First we looked on the papir in a half time, but we could'nt find out. 2 hour later i found a system. The system was following: minus 6, plus 4, multiplied 7 and divided by 2. I said it to Karen, and she was convinced that  it was right. I handed my hand up and Sheila came over to me. I told her my system, and she said is was correct. Sheila said: STOP, I think we has found our winners, will the winners pleas come up to me? Karen and I went to them, and they give us 2 big gifts. The gifts was two very big and cool lollipops. After some hours it was time to dinner. Karen and I was hurried to eating, and then we went right up to sleep. I fell asleep quickly.

Den SKAL være i datid!

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