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1- Resume Of the film: The film Missisippi Burning starting with a drink place where the drink is splitted op where the white drink for theirs and the colored drink theirs water. 3 persons driving a car 2 white 1 negro, 3 from Ku Klux Klan comes and stop them, they saying any thing racist to the white and shot them in the head. Mr. Ward and Mr. Anderson come to Missisppi for to find the 3 boys. They is from FBI. Mr. Ward and Mr. Anderson come in to the sheriff and ask him some questions, after they was in the sheriff, they going to a resturant and will but it's full. So they go over to a negro and ask some queastions. Them from Ku Klux Klan comes and ask a negro about he's brother and he's brother come out but they will kill him they run and run but to the end they catch him and kill him. Somebody through a bomb to Mr. Ward and Mr. Anderson's office and they look out and see a burning kross. Them from KKK took a negro and put him in to a big jail. Mr. Anderson talk with Mayor about the 3 missing boys. Them from KKK has right killed a negro and push him out of a car. Mr. Ward and Mr. Anderson and a lot of people looking after the 3 missing boys in a river, and they see a car but it's exploded, there come a kranium and take the car out, but there was nothing in the car. Mr. Ward called 100 FBI peoples for at find the 3 missing boys. The 3 boys of KKK explod and burning a lot of church's. Mr. Ward and Mr. Anderson come to a place where ther was a lot of negro's and talk with 2 negro's. They come to Mr. Pell's house and will talk with him.
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06. september 2005 af appelsin (Slettet)
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06. september 2005 af appelsin (Slettet)
Men her er nogle af dine fejl:
-kongruens ("They is from FBI")
-brug af forskellige tider ("Mr. Ward and Mr. Anderson come to a place where ther was a lot of negro's and talk with 2 negro's")
-brug af -ing ("The film Missisippi Burning starting with a drink place")
-ringe sætninger, der er svære at forstå ("The film Missisippi Burning starting with a drink place where the drink is splitted op where the white drink for theirs and the colored drink theirs water.")
lile ordforråd (du bruger de samme ord igen og igen)
No offense, men har du brugt et oversættelsesprogram?
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06. september 2005 af appelsin (Slettet)
Måske forstår du ikke en hentydning.
Du går i folkeskolen, ikke?
Min søster er begyndt på den nye reform.
Under den nye reform skal man have eng B, og det er TRE-årigt. Men hvad er det værste?
At man skal op i en skr. prøve! Da du bliver smidt ud, hvis du bliver opdaget ( = 00 eller 03), er den eneste mulighed: At lære engelsk.
Så du kan lige så godt sætte dig ned og lære det nu, for du får sgu brug for det i fremtiden...
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06. september 2005 af Fassos (Slettet)
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