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I do not know what to do.

The only thing I took with me was my rucksak.

After that I just wait for you.

I wan't you to find me and help me.

My name is Samantha Landon. I have written this message because I need you. I am stranded on an island and I don’t know what I shall do.  I am alone and I need your help. I come from USA. I was in a boat with my boyfriend Tyler. We had planned to sail on the ocean. It was very nice, but Tyler and I were fighting, Tyler would not stay with me. I did not care. He jumps out of the boat and down to the water so he could swim into the beach. I would sail further so I did. I was really angry and sad, and the whole thing was doesn't matter. I was stupid and I let the boat go its own way, I was don’t care. I fell asleep. And suddenly I woke up. I was not in the boat more. I was on a desert island. I was really afraid. Afraid of everything. I do not know what to do. I was alone on the beach. But where was my boat? It was gone. Totally gone. It was scary. Suddenly was where a sound, it comes from the water. It was a marine turtle, a big one. The only thing I took with me was my rucksack.  I have some food in it, and it was good because I am really hungry.  I have a bottle too, so I would look after a pen and some paper in my bag. I found it! I was so glad. I would make a bottle message. After that I just wait for you. I Hope the person that find this message believe me, and will help me, because it’s a real story. I want you to find me and help me. I have not so much food and water with me, so I cannot be here much more than a week. I would be so happy. I will not die on a desert island so I really hope you will find my bottle very soon, and so help me and not just blow it away. I will love you the rest of my life if you will help me. Please help me!

Hvad synes du om dette? 

He jumped..

And the whole thing didn't matter..

I didn't care..

I was not in the boat anymore..

I did not know what to do..

Suddenly I heard a sound. It came from the water. 

I had some food in it, and that was good because I was really hungry..

I had a bottle too.   

I don't have so much food and water ... 

I don't want to die on a desert island... 

And then help me and not just blow it away...

Sådan ville jeg rette det, håber det var en hjælp! 
Næste gang, så vær opmærksom på ikke at skifte mellem nutid og datid så meget :-)

Mnage tak!