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Rette engelsk?!

01. oktober 2012 af andreasbirkedal (Slettet) - Niveau: 9. klasse

Hey alle sammen! Har en engelsk stil som i meget gerne må læse igennem og evt. rette fejl. Mange tak på forhånd!

William Shakespeare is probably one of the most famous poets and play-writers. He was born in Stratford in 1564, and died the same place, when he was only 52 years old. William was the third child, and he had four sisters, and three brothers.
Williams first school year was on the Kings New School in Stratford, where he was teach’ in Latin. When he was 18, William married a 26 year old girl named Anna Hathaway. The reason why, they got married in a rush, were probably because, Anna was pregnant, and at that time, it was illegal to get pregnant, without a husband. Together they got a daughter called Susanna, and later on they got twins: Hamnet and Judith. Tragically Hamnet died, when she was only 11 years old. In the years between 1585 and 1592, you didn’t heard much from Shakespeare, which has led many speculations. Shakespeare started investing in many things. For example The Globe, which were build by Shakespeare playing company: Lord Chamberlain’s Men. Later on, the globe got destroyed by fire. In 1997 a new modern reconstruction was build. Shakespeare became a rich man! William started writing comedies and Chronicles, but he was still most focused on writing tragedies. One of his most famous tragedies was Hamlet. In 1600’th century was the English language for the first time, put on the same line, as Latin, and French. Before the 1600’th century, all official things god handled in Latin or French, especially in literature, philosophy and religion. At that time, English was an unlearned language, and almost everybody could speak French or Latin.
Shakespeare has up throughout the time written 38 plays and 154 sonnets. In his time it was his sonnets he was most known for, but in retrospect, most of the people today, know him from his plays. He wrote many tragedies and comedies with English history as a background, such as King Richard III and King Henry VI, but he also wrote adventure plays, such as The Winter's tale.   
William Shakespeare wrote many sonnets. A sonnet, is a short text, it contains 14 lines, and Shakespeare’s sonnets, most of his sonnets were about love and fame. Here’s a sonnet from Shakespeare’s most popular play:  Romeo and Juliet.
“From fairest creatures we desire increase,
That thereby beauty's rose might never die,
But as the riper should by time decease,
His tender heir might bear his memory:
But thou contracted to thine own bright eyes,
Feed'st thy light's flame with self-substantial fuel,
Making a famine where abundance lies,
Thy self thy foe, to thy sweet self too cruel:
Thou that art now the world's fresh ornament,
And only herald to the gaudy spring,
Within thine own bud buriest thy content,
And tender churl mak'st waste in niggarding:
Pity the world, or else this glutton be,
To eat the world's due, by the grave and thee.”
Romeo and Juliet is probably Shakespeare’s most popular play. It’s about a girl and a boy, and they love each other. But their families are in a fight, so they can’t be together. And at the end, to deaths, is the reason, to peace between to families. 

Shakespeare's influence as a writer is a result of the fact that he was the most original and universally appealing of the writers of this age, and he has served to inspire and ready the patterns for modern literature.
 


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01. oktober 2012 af Musling14 (Slettet)

Vi er her ikke for at rette dine afleveringer. Men efter et hurtigt skimt ned over siden, kan jeg fortælle dig at man ikke omtaler forfattere ved fornavn. Du kender ham ikke personligt. Nævn ham som enten Shakespeare eller William Shakespeare. 


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Svar #2
08. oktober 2012 af rakijovic

>> "Har en engelsk stil som i meget gerne må læse igennem og evt. rette fejl."

Jamen dog...af hjertet tak! Hvor heldig kan man være? Ih, jeg får næsten lyst til at knibe en tåre...

Jeg tilslutter mig helt og fuldkomment min ærede medkontributørs standpunkt i #2.

(Desuden mangler din, af mig citerede, sætning et subjekt, og det personlige stedord for anden person flertal nominativ staves på dansk med stort. Et lille 'i', derimod, er en præposition.)

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