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Hej alle sammen. Føler der er en del fejl i min tekst, men kan ikke rigtig selv finde dem.. så håber der er en der vil kigge lidt på det, måske bare skimme :-). på forhånd tak.
I know they think what I had done not is okay, but if they think more about it, I’m sure they can see the point of it. All the homeless have a miserable life on the street, and will die in a horrible way, so why wait? So they can go the last time and have a feeling of misery? No. And that’s way I do all that, that must they could see? But I will never regret what I have done. I’m trained to kill. When I was soldier, it was my chief function to kill. I do all this for my country. When you are a soldier and kill you enemies, you are not a murder, more like a hero. I know many people look at me now, and think he is a man who fights for what are right. Many people need of positive role model, and I can be one now.
But I must admit I am very scared now, what will happen to me? I will be imprisoned for life, if they judge me. But there is still a little hope inside me, there say that I being released. All the things I have done are so carefully thought out, and I will never have failed. The only reason to I was exposed was Link. And if is not had been for him, they never had discovered anything about my army. I was really careful and when they come to my house to inquire me, they thought all the words I say to them. So if I make a good plan, why should I not could convince them this time too? But on the other side I will not hide my mission anymore, which I have done is so big, and there is so many people there will see up to me now, witch nobody had done before. So the question is what I must do? I’ve had have a whole year to figure it out, and now it’s already tomorrow, and I really not what to do…
Svar #1
20. oktober 2012 af ASVO (Slettet)
Før I'm skal der være punktum (første linje)
Intet komma før and (anden linje)
Brug et andet ord end chief function (brug ordbogen)
Murder= mord, murderer= morder
Håber det kan hjælpe dig lidt på vej :)
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