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"Yes, I know it's too good to be true, but today is a very special day. Today is the day I have waitied for so long time! Today is the day I’ll be called to testify at the trial against Shelter. But what can I say, so they'll undoubtedly judge Shelter? If he is going out, it will be the worst thing I'll even could imagine. He killed my best friend, the guy that learned me everything, to live on the street. He killed the sweetest person I've ever have met. Not like Gali. Oh, I will not think about Gali anymore. After I've met her, I've never been so happy before. It was better than living in my own house , and to have my own bed. But when we are talking about bed, I’m glad to be home again. The year on the street took so hard on my body. And when mum came after me, and told me Vince had left her, I was so happy. Of course I hope that mum had left Vince, but if it couldn't be different, it must be that way. And it took me no time, to say YES to come home again. But after all that with Gail, I will never fall in love with a woman again, no one will broke my heart again. But now I will sleep, so I’m fresh tomorrow. And then I’ll get hit on Shelter.