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Barack Hussein Obama born August 4 1961 is the 44th and current president of the United States. Barack Obama is the first black president. Barack Obamas slogan is forward in the 2012 speech.
I will vote for Barack Obama in the presidential election on 6 November 2012. Because he is the right person who you can vote for. I would also vote for him because he is the first president to have been black in the USA. If he is elected, there will be more lately black president in the world. What I like about Obama is that he does what he promises. Example it with the Iraq war, when his opponent said it was “tragic” to end the war in Iraq. Now he has ended the war in Iraq. He has not led the USA into a new war.
I also like about him are that while his opponent would spend more money on military hardware, Obama will use the money to pay people debt and put more people back to work. It`s really good, then there will be more people in work which will earn their own money.
Obama Barack has also signature commercial juices that can help businesses sell more products to millions of new customers. As there´s going to be made in America.
I also like the other candidate (Mitt Rommey ), but he is not the person that I would choose. I like about him is that he says in his speech if you choose me, then there will be freedom of religion and freedom to say agree opinion in the USA. There is nothing that I would say it I do not like when Mitt Rommey. Mon I do not think his speech was good. He spoke not as well as Barack Obama.
Svar #3
31. oktober 2012 af acka (Slettet)
Det her lyder måske lidt hårdt. Men teksten er fuld af fejl og der er sætninger, hvor man decideret ikke forstår meningen. Har du helt ærligt rettet den igennem, for det virker ikke sådan.
Måske tager jeg fejl, så må du undskylde, og så skulle du måske få en person i den "virkelige" verden til at hjælpe dig. Det ville nok være en hel del nemmere for dig og du ville nok også få mere ud af det.
Svar #4
01. november 2012 af JEEJ2008 (Slettet)
ok altså hvis du have nogle sp. til noget konkret i teksten ville jeg nok gerne svare dig. Men jeg kan ikke forstå at folk vil have rettet deres stile inden de afleverer dem. Det er er jo ikke meningen at man skal aflevere en stil som en anden har rettet. Det er dig der skal lave stilen, aflevere den, og så retter din lærer den. Når du får den tilbage er det meningen at du skal lære af det som evt. er blevet rettet :)
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