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This story is about a young girl named Brenda and her sister’s disappearing. One day Brenda came home from lunchtime because she didn’t feel so well. A policeman was in the area. He sought after missing girls. Anna’s sister was missing. But it wasn’t a new thing. She had been missing in some time. They didn’t know why. Anna and her family were fretted. Anna loved her sister, she was her role model. “She’s the image of what our Anna was when she disappeared. The image! She’s our Anna all over again. As long as we’ve got Brenda, our Anna’s still alive!” That was Anna’s mother’s words.  It took Anna back to when Brenda was with her side.  Anna feels like she needs to take over her sister’s role.  The sister Brenda have a picture, in the picture are her boyfriend. He had dark hair and his eyes looked right out at you. Anna feel like it’s her boyfriend now. All Brenda’s thing is Anna’s now, and Brenda is Anna. That was what Anna feels. Anna can do so her face and eyes looks totally blank. And when Anna did that was it because she would have that people should know what she thought. Suddenly is Brenda back.  Anna does not understand that.  Anna does not know what she will do. Anna detective that she not have been herself, but an another person. Maybe because she wasn’t insecure on herself. After some time is Anna a new Anna, not Brenda or the old Anna, a totally new Anna. She is confident and happy.