rettelse af engelsk stil

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                                                                The recycling process of aluminum cans

Have we ever think about what will happened to an alaminium can after we use it?. Everyday and everywhere there are many of young people who use many of aluminum cans ,but unfortunately they have no idea about how would we recycle them, and use them in the future. The recycling process of alaminium cans take place on a special manufactories , and its going in six stages. First of all after when we enjoy our favorite bevarge in an alaminium can , we have to be a good stort and put the alaminium can in a bag for recycling , and throw them on a special container for alaminium only.  after all that the Recycling company takes the cans to a recycling plant. The aluminum is shredded and melted. The molten aluminum is gradually hardened into ingot for. Ingots are made into aluminum sheets or other desired forms. The aluminum is made into new cans, and the cycle begins again.