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I´m really happy to going in Rundhøj high school and my class. We are 31 in the class and have something in common that we all buy from the canteen every day. Langkær high school is very nicely and places for everyone. One of the best is that once but will eat with friends agree there is always room in the canteen.
I write this to you concerning the canteen.
I would first say that in the very yummy cakes. There are a lot of different foods, both healthy and unhealthy. I do not always buy food from the canteen. I think it's a little expensive to buy food from the canteen. For example a small pizza for 12 DKK crowns is expensive. It would be great if it could cost DKK 5 It is small then, but always buy two paragraphs. This cost a total of 24 DKK. It is also unhealthy. It contains much fat. It´s not good for students.
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02. december 2012 af bjornling (Slettet)
I' m really happy to go to Rundhøj high school and my calss. We are 31 in my class and have something in common; that we all buy from the canteen every day. Langkær high school is very nice, and a place for everyone. One of the best is that ..... mærkelig sætning. I write this to you concerning the canteen.
I would first say that in the very yummy cakes <---- omformulér. There are a lot of different foods, both healthy and unhealthy. I do not always buy food from the canteen. I think it's a little expensive to buy food from the canteen. For example a small pizza for 12 DKK crowns is expensive. It would be great if it could cost DKK 5. It is small then, but always buy two paragraphs <--- omformulér. To stykker=two pieces/slices of pizza. This cost a total of 24 DKK. It is also unhealthy. It contains much fat. It´s not good for students.
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