simpel og udvidet datid

vil i være sød nok og ret den for mig 

1. jim stod og ventede ved busstoppestedet. cloak var næsten 7

2. jim frøs, og det var ved at blive mørkt
3. han tændte en cigaret og trampede med fødderne for at holde sig varm
4. en halv time senere, da jams kæreste stod af bussen, sneede det
5. da willy vågende op, vidste han ikke, hvor han var. hvad lavede han i dette værelse, og hvor var hans kammerater?
6.pludselig huskede han, hvad der var sket aftenen før.
7.i april fløj liza til rom for at besøge roberto
8.roberto viste hende nogle af de gamle paladser og kirker, og selvfølgelig besøgte de hans familie
9.bedstemoderen sad i en gyngestol og strikkede et par røde sokker, da roberto og liza trådte ind i stuen
10.da liza forlod italien, skinnede solen. da hun ankom til Heathrow, øsregnede det.

har lavet dem, men er ikke helt sikker om det er rigtigt, vil i være sød og ret den for mig. 

1.Jim was waiting at the bus stop. cloak was almost 7
2.Jim froze, and it was getting dark
3.He lit a cigarette and stomped their feet to keep warm
4.half an hour later, when jams girlfriend got off the bus, it was snowing
5.as willy-monitoring up, he did not know where he was. what was he doing in this room, and where were his comrades?
6.Suddenly he remembered what had happened the night before.
7.in April flew liza to rum to visit roberto
8.roberto showed her some of the old palaces and churches, and of course they visited his family
9.grandmother sitting in a rocking chair and knitted a pair of red socks when roberto and liza came into the room
10. as liza left Italy, the sun was shining. when she arrived at Heathrow, it was pouring.