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12. februar 2013 af Line123L (Slettet)

Hej. Er der nogle, der vil læse mit abstract igennem, er det et korrekt abstract og er det skrevet på korrekt engelsk?

På forhånd tak :-)

This paper investigates the theme "Intercultural Migration" in the film "Bread and Roses" (Ken Loach) and "Gegen die Wand" (Fatih Akin). It begins with comparison of the two films, where the focus is on the characters cultures, the reason why they migrate and which pull and push factors. Then the paper focuses on the similarities and differences between the main characters. Then it will explained the environment in respectively Turkey vs. Germany and Mexico vs. USA. Afterwards the paper investigates the films fiction in relation to the data. This paper also focus on the Analysis and interpretation of a selected picture from each film and then how the film and how the film is received. The paper provides a perspective for the film Maria Full of grace at the end. The paper is partly based on based on texts from lessons, analysis of the film and websites.

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13. februar 2013 af Humanlover (Slettet)

Jeg ville nok have skrevet følgende:

This paper is about the theme "Intercultural Migration" according to the movies "Bread and Roses" by Ken Loach and "Gegen die Wand" by Fatih Akin.
It start by comparing the two movies, with focus on the characters cultures and why they migrate, including the different pull and push factors.
Futhermore the paper focuses on the similarities and differenties between the main characters.
It then explains the enviroment respectively Turkey vs. Germany and Mexico vs. USA, hereby investigating the movies' fiction in relation to the data.
The paper also looks on the analysis and interpretation of one single frame from each movie and on how the movies are received by the viewers.
All together the paper provides a good perspective of Maria in the end, who is full of grace, and is partially based on texts read in class, together with the analysis of the movie and websites.

Håber at det kan bruges :)

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