engelsk rettelse?

Hej. Jeg har skrevet lidt om kriminalitet på engelsk. Og har en masse fejl. Håber i vil rette. Tak på forhånd.'

Now I will tell you about crime in general. But what I most want to focus on is why young people from 14-18 commits a crime. First let me tell definition of crime. Crime is when a person violates the law. Then you will be branded as a criminal. There are many kinds of crime: theft, violence, fraud, computer crime, and I can go on. Top of the list you will find Lundtoftegade in Nørrebro in Copenhagen, where 462 convicted criminals per 10,000 inhabitants.
But the question has always been, why rising crime so much. There are many factors that come into play. Parents who work a lot, do not have time to take care of her children, care for them, help them or have contact with them. As children get no care. The child will therefore seek love outside. It may be that is filled with problems in the family, the child may get violent. People who invent themselves in the streets, is also almost criminal, because they largely to talk to some criminals, and they will be affected. For people living in the streets has hardly an education or a job, or actually because of boredom, and then they can find to l
ave anything illegal. There is also a study showing that children who bully or are bullied in school, have a greater risk of becoming criminals than children who are doing well in school. You will be punished by coming into prison, but we all know that it is not a solution when you come out you will commit crimes again.
My opinion and crime: as I said rising crime much. An example as family circumstances. There should be more considerate. Komunnen may help any more, so the family can get better. And there will be more control in their children's schooling. Maybe there should be more special klube where criminals could be allowed to talk to some not criminals. It is a good idea that you go to jail, but if you come to prison with some criminal, you become more criminal. Solutions must be found to prison, it is no use to block young people in a room. They will be more depressed and stressed. Perhaps more psychologists, more help. Young people are the future, so it must clearly be addressed.