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The various authors have mixed opinions in 3 different texts. Jamie Doward and Simon Heffer they both find it considers it important to change the legislation. They also gives the blame on the owners to the dogs and see it as a big problem that irresponsible people has pit bulls and that kind of breeds. If the breed is on the banded list, then the police have the opportunity to remove the dogs from its home. But the real problem is to identify witch dogs are dangerous and witch are not dangerous. Victoria Stilwell she is a calmer. She finds odd that some people would leave their little child alone with a strange dog. “You would not leave your baby alone with a stranger - so why a dog?” She tells where you can get a “good” dog, in kennels can you always visit the puppies and get a dog there have been treated fair. Finally is dog training an excellent idea. Mrs. Stilwell knows that it nearly will be impossible, but she hopes that one day dog training will be compulsory, where she compares with that you must have a driving license to drive a car.

    Simon Heffer pulls out the heavy guns right from the start. “I know we have many other things to worry about and where he after that say but let us never forget, as Victorians didn’t, that the poor are always with us.” Mr. Heffer explains his views and his point in shortly sentences and i think he is quiet easy to understand. “1057 of these repulsive animals are “legally” owned in this country; we wait to hear whether the dog that attacked Ellie Lawrenson was one of them” Mr. Heffer was settling with his opinion and he is surprised that there are so many dangerous pit bulls in a normally residential area. But Mr. Heffer makes all equal or tar with the same brush, because he is refers to that every dangerous dog has a dangerous owner behind. I think that is a harsh pronouncement. “And it underlines the point that wherever one finds a dangerous dog, there is normally a dangerous human lurking not far away” It is a terrible comment, because what does he really knows about that? He finds it more necessary to take control of all the dangerous humans, like drug dealer housebreakers, rape men and so on.