Rettelse af engelsk

Har lavet det meste af mit engelsk, det kunne være rart hvis der var nogle der ville rette mine dumme fejl. Hvis der var en der ville hjælpe mig lidt med at oversætte de to første da jeg har lidt svært ved nogle af sætningerne. 

School shooting in the USA

Reasons:

Culture:
Back from the settlers time, where they protect
Helt tilbage fra nybyggernes tid, hvor man beskyttede sit terrortorie og sin familie og muligvis sin indtægts kilde i form af guld, jordyrkelse, olie borig og dyr. Det man grundlage dengang er stadig en så stor fundameltal kultur i amerikanernes levevis, at de egentlig ikke har rykket sig meget fra den primitive måde at beskytte sig selv på.  En anden ting er også den store kriminaltiet og vold de har i deres land og det er legalt at skyde folk for at trænge ind på ens jord. Det er legalt at forsvare sig selv med at dræbe. Og igen, man skyder først og spørger bagefter.

Peer Presure:
Peer persure is when a group of people want you to be
Gruppepres er når en gruppe  vil have at du skal være på en måde for at kan være sammen med dig. Når du på ingen måder passer ind i en gruppe bliver du holdt udenfor, det er de færreste mennesker der kan holde til en social udelukkelse af fællesskabet. Nogle af os er født på til at være en bestemt person og kan ikke laves om så man kan tilpasse sig en gruppe, og hvis gruppen er fleksibel og åbensindet kan de ikke optage person i fællesskabet. Hvis du er blevet holdt udenfor i gennem er årerække og du er psykisk svag, kan du finde på handlinger som skole skyderi og massakre fordi man tror at man eliminere det der gør ens liv negativt.

Columbine:
It is only 11 years since Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold shot them into the history.
On only 40 minutes, Eric and Dylan had shot and killed 13 people, wounded 24 people. After the massacre Eric and Dylan committed suicide in Columbine High Schools library. Even after 11 years, people still se Columbine as the worst school shooting ever, while there has been a lot worse things since the shoots. For example Virginia tech university where co seung-Hui killed 32 people. Columbine is a perfect vision of school shooting: violence, teenagers out of control.

Newtown:
On December 14, 2012, Adam Lanza 20 years old, fatally shot 20 chidrens and six teachers at sandy hook elementary school i Newtown. Before driving to the school. Adam had shot and killed his mom Nancy. After the massacre Adam committed suicide by shooting him self in the head.
The incident is the second deadliest mass shooting by a singe person in American history, after the 2007 Viginia tech massacre.
- 32 killed 17 wounded
- name: cho (senior) mentally ill
- committed suicide
The Newtown-massacre is nr. 153 in the world

Compare with DK:
Bullying and peer pressure can be found anywhere in the world. But the countries and cultures between have different ways to handle it. We do not have the tradiotion to protect us self with weapons I Denmark, so its far away from our culture. In America it is easy to get access to a weapon and it is legal. In Denmark it is only legal to carry a weapon if you have a huntling licence and weapon permit.
And again in America's tradtition to shoot first and ask questions afterwards. Obama has tried to impose stricter gun laws but was completely defeated by the U.S. population

How can we: stop school shooting:

Gun laws:
It will be to difficult to change the weapon laws in America, it will take hundreds of years and many people see it as impossiple.
Theres a new law in a town called Nelson in the state Georgia that says every home in Nelson must own at least one firearm with ammunition in order to contribute to the city's safety.
But so far, there is no legal punishment for those who have not acquired a weapon.

Adult help:
parents need to educate their childrens to be open-minded.
Parents can do a lot and make sure to keep an eye on how your children behave. The school also has a big responsibility for the classes and how each student thrive and The teachers must be better to spot the outsiders

Other means:
If weapons is not easily accessible, when we will reduce the risk for shootings

School shooting is a huge problem, we know its caused by bulling, bad parenting or something horrible in their past. Cannot prevent this from happening, but we can downgrade it so it only happened a third of the times. The biggest solution is a metal detector in every school, but off course, this would cost the nation more than a billion dollars. An other method is very simple, but not as effective. Good teachers, good teammates and no bullying in schools. And for the bad parenting problem, kids should be able to go to every teacher and ask for help or support. A phone line isn’t enough (som børnetelefonen) there’s only communication through sound, and kids needs communication physical an eye contact.

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