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27. oktober 2005 af
Hanniballen (Slettet)
Hvis i ville se om der evt. var fejl i dette jeg har skrvet, og evt. sige hvad fejlene er. Og rette det, ville det være en stor hjælp. :)
The 2nd October 1869, Gandhi was born. Gandhi got married in 1883, when he was 13 years old with a girl named Kasturba, their married were decided by there parents. After Gandhi’s father died, he went to England to study law. 8 years later (1893) he went to South Africa, to work on a case for an Indian merchant, but under the trip Gandhi was thrown out of first class and out of the train. It was there Gandhi got his first meeting with the national injustice. Gandhi began to fight for the Indians, by using his knowledge about the people rights and his non- violent vision.
Gandhi was a man that cared about his fellow people no matter how they looked or what they believed in. He took the struggle against the system, and sacrificed his own health just to get the people to listen, and the government. He grew a lot as the time went by. Gandhi came as a man with no knowledge about how the people had it, to be a man that had what they had. Gandhi was a great man, and everybody had respect for his person.
The day Gandhi died were a day people never will forget. People all over came to show him the respect at his funeral. The people went side by side, not thinking of what they believed in or what they had. They went together, as Gandhi wanted, they were equal.
Gandhi is person that always will be in our history, because of what he did. He fought, but unfortunately he had to die before he could win. It was there people realized what was going on, and they began to fight on, with Gandhi’s non-violent speech in their minds.
The 2nd October 1869, Gandhi was born. Gandhi got married in 1883, when he was 13 years old with a girl named Kasturba, their married were decided by there parents. After Gandhi’s father died, he went to England to study law. 8 years later (1893) he went to South Africa, to work on a case for an Indian merchant, but under the trip Gandhi was thrown out of first class and out of the train. It was there Gandhi got his first meeting with the national injustice. Gandhi began to fight for the Indians, by using his knowledge about the people rights and his non- violent vision.
Gandhi was a man that cared about his fellow people no matter how they looked or what they believed in. He took the struggle against the system, and sacrificed his own health just to get the people to listen, and the government. He grew a lot as the time went by. Gandhi came as a man with no knowledge about how the people had it, to be a man that had what they had. Gandhi was a great man, and everybody had respect for his person.
The day Gandhi died were a day people never will forget. People all over came to show him the respect at his funeral. The people went side by side, not thinking of what they believed in or what they had. They went together, as Gandhi wanted, they were equal.
Gandhi is person that always will be in our history, because of what he did. He fought, but unfortunately he had to die before he could win. It was there people realized what was going on, and they began to fight on, with Gandhi’s non-violent speech in their minds.
Svar #3
27. oktober 2005 af MacMadsen (Slettet)
Hvorfor ikke? det er noget nemmere at rette hvis man har du skal oversætte. Ellers kan det være svært at se meningen med sætningen. Husk det er meningen og ikke ordene du skal oversætte.
Svar #4
27. oktober 2005 af Hanniballen (Slettet)
Det er bare noget jeg har skrvet.
Der er ikke en dansk oversættelse til. Men hvis der er noget du er i tvivl med, så skriv det da endelig.
Der er ikke en dansk oversættelse til. Men hvis der er noget du er i tvivl med, så skriv det da endelig.
Svar #6
27. oktober 2005 af MacMadsen (Slettet)
Okay...
Generelt: Alt for mange komma'er. Der er ikke nær så mange kommaer på engelsk som på dansk.
Første sætning skal bytte rund og ikke noget komma.
Ghandi got married at the of 13 to a girl.....
their marriage was...
After the death of Ghandi's father....
Indian merchant, but during the trip....
"Gandhi began to fight for the Indians, by using his knowledge about the people rights and his non- violent vision." Den sætning er rodet og ikke særlig klar.
Just to get the people and the government to listen....
no knowledge about how the people was doing ("had it" = havde det, er meget meget dansk. Det er der ikke noget der hedder på engelsk)
came to show him respect...
Ghandi is a person...
It was then people...
Håber det hjalp lidt. Hvis du er i tvivl så spørg endelig.
Generelt: Alt for mange komma'er. Der er ikke nær så mange kommaer på engelsk som på dansk.
Første sætning skal bytte rund og ikke noget komma.
Ghandi got married at the of 13 to a girl.....
their marriage was...
After the death of Ghandi's father....
Indian merchant, but during the trip....
"Gandhi began to fight for the Indians, by using his knowledge about the people rights and his non- violent vision." Den sætning er rodet og ikke særlig klar.
Just to get the people and the government to listen....
no knowledge about how the people was doing ("had it" = havde det, er meget meget dansk. Det er der ikke noget der hedder på engelsk)
came to show him respect...
Ghandi is a person...
It was then people...
Håber det hjalp lidt. Hvis du er i tvivl så spørg endelig.
Svar #8
27. oktober 2005 af Hanniballen (Slettet)
Nu har jeg rette det, er det rigtig nu, ca?
The 2nd October 1869, Gandhi was born. Gandhi got married at the age of 13 to a girl named Kasturba in 1883, their marriage were decided by there parents. After the death of Gandhi’s father, he went to England to study law. 8 years later (1893) he went to South Africa, to work on a case for an Indian merchant, but during the trip Gandhi was thrown out of first class and out of the train. It was there Gandhi got his first meeting with the national injustice. Gandhi began to fight for the Indians, by using his knowledge about the peoplerights, and his non- violent vision.
Gandhi was a man that cared about his fellow people no matter how they looked or what they believed in. He took the struggle against the system, and sacrificed his own healthjust to get the people and the government to listen. He grew a lot as the time went by. Gandhi came as a man with no knowledge about how the people was doing, to be a man that had what they had. Gandhi was a great man, and everybody had respect for his person.
The day Gandhi died were a day people never will forget. People all over came to show him respect at his funeral. The people went side by side, not thinking of what they believed in or what they had. They went together, as Gandhi wanted, they were equal.
Gandhi is a person that always will be in our history, because of what he did. He fought, but unfortunately he had to die before he could win. It was then people realized what was going on, and they began to fight on, with Gandhi’s non-violent speech in their minds.
The 2nd October 1869, Gandhi was born. Gandhi got married at the age of 13 to a girl named Kasturba in 1883, their marriage were decided by there parents. After the death of Gandhi’s father, he went to England to study law. 8 years later (1893) he went to South Africa, to work on a case for an Indian merchant, but during the trip Gandhi was thrown out of first class and out of the train. It was there Gandhi got his first meeting with the national injustice. Gandhi began to fight for the Indians, by using his knowledge about the peoplerights, and his non- violent vision.
Gandhi was a man that cared about his fellow people no matter how they looked or what they believed in. He took the struggle against the system, and sacrificed his own healthjust to get the people and the government to listen. He grew a lot as the time went by. Gandhi came as a man with no knowledge about how the people was doing, to be a man that had what they had. Gandhi was a great man, and everybody had respect for his person.
The day Gandhi died were a day people never will forget. People all over came to show him respect at his funeral. The people went side by side, not thinking of what they believed in or what they had. They went together, as Gandhi wanted, they were equal.
Gandhi is a person that always will be in our history, because of what he did. He fought, but unfortunately he had to die before he could win. It was then people realized what was going on, and they began to fight on, with Gandhi’s non-violent speech in their minds.
Svar #11
27. oktober 2005 af jönsson (Slettet)
+On the 2nd October 1869, Gandhi was born. Gandhi got married at the age of 13 to a girl named Kasturba in 1883, their marriage were/was decided by there/their parents. After the death of Gandhi’s father, he went to England to study law. 8 years later (1893) he went to South Africa, to work on a case for an Indian merchant, but during the trip Gandhi was thrown out of first class and out of the train. It was there Gandhi got his first meeting with the national injustice. Gandhi began to fight/fighting/his fight for the Indians, by using his knowledge about the people/people's rights, and his non- violent/non-violent vision.
Gandhi was a man that/who cared about his fellow people no matter how they looked or what they believed in. He took the struggle against the system, and sacrificed his own healthjust/health, just to get the people and the government to listen. He grew a lot as (the) time went by. Gandhi came as a man with no knowledge about how the people was doing, to be a man that/who had what they had. Gandhi was a great man, and everybody had respect for his person.
The day Gandhi died were/was a day people never will forget. People all over came to show him respect at his funeral. The people(people bruges lidt for mange gange her) went side by side, not thinking of what they believed in or what they had. They went together, as Gandhi wanted, they were equal.
Gandhi is a person that (always) will /always be in our history, because of what he did. He fought, but unfortunately he had to die before he could win. It was then people realized what was going on, and they began to fight on, with Gandhi’s non-violent speech in their minds.
Kommaer på engelsk sættes kun hvor der er en lydlig pause i talestrømmen, og det syns jeg du har ramt meget godt her.
jönsson
Gandhi was a man that/who cared about his fellow people no matter how they looked or what they believed in. He took the struggle against the system, and sacrificed his own healthjust/health, just to get the people and the government to listen. He grew a lot as (the) time went by. Gandhi came as a man with no knowledge about how the people was doing, to be a man that/who had what they had. Gandhi was a great man, and everybody had respect for his person.
The day Gandhi died were/was a day people never will forget. People all over came to show him respect at his funeral. The people(people bruges lidt for mange gange her) went side by side, not thinking of what they believed in or what they had. They went together, as Gandhi wanted, they were equal.
Gandhi is a person that (always) will /always be in our history, because of what he did. He fought, but unfortunately he had to die before he could win. It was then people realized what was going on, and they began to fight on, with Gandhi’s non-violent speech in their minds.
Kommaer på engelsk sættes kun hvor der er en lydlig pause i talestrømmen, og det syns jeg du har ramt meget godt her.
jönsson
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