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A person I admire
Many people inspire me, you can't stop admire another person. But who is the one, who takes care of me, advice me, shows me the right way, and just does many things for me. It's my mother. I also admire my father, my grandmother, my uncle and i can go on. But no one can be like my mother. A woman who risked her life for nine months. A women who always think about me, a woman who can't sleep if I don't eat dinner, a woman who always calling several times a day and ask " Is it not cold, came home" when I'm outside. How can I not love this woman. My mother did not have an opportunity to get an education when she was younger. My mother chose two years ago and read to the educator, one of the reasons was to learn a lot so she could practice things she has learn with his children. Also, of course, make a difference for some other children. exactly this situation has actually make me stronger. It has shown me how important it is to make a difference for others. Even though my mother comes from Turkey, do not have a Danish accent, she is strong enough. In the beginning she seems that it was hard for her, but my mom always say's " If you can dream it, you can do it"
Svar #1
22. september 2013 af Lindexgaard (Slettet)
A person I admire
Many people inspire me, you can not stop admiring another person. Who is the one, who takes care of me? Gives me advice? directs me in the right way and helps me no matter what? It is my mother. I also admire my father, my grandmother and my uncle, the list goes on. But no one can compare to my mother. A woman who risked her life for nine months. A women who always thinks about me, a woman who can not sleep unless I eat dinner, a woman who always calls me several times a day and ask if: "It is not too cold? Maybe you should come home". How can I not love this woman? My mother did not have the opportunity to get an education when she was younger. Two years ago my mother chose to get an education, one of her reasons was to learn more, so she could practice the things she has learned from her own children. And also, of course, to make a difference for some other children in need. This exact situation has made me stronger. It has shown me how important it is to make a difference for others. Even though my mother comes from Turkey, and does not have a Danish accent, she is as strong as any other person. In the beginning it seemed hard on her, but my mom always says: "If you can dream it, you can do it".
Svar #2
23. september 2013 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
Man skriver normalt "can not" i eet ord: "cannot".
Her er et par fejl mere:
A woman who always thinks about me, a woman who can not sleep unless I eat dinner, a woman who always calls me several times a day and asks if:
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