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Ret fejl
01. november 2005 af
kim19 (Slettet)
Jeg er en nar til engelsk, hvis der er en der gider bare at rette fejlene i teksten vil jeg blive glad.
I don’t think your muscles are growing faster when you are poor, but I think you mentally will grow lard when you don’t have some secure conditions and surroundings. When you live in a family where the parents can’t afford to have the children to stay home, and do nothing, so you have to grow up fast, so you can get out and make some money to the family. These days, in 2005, children do not have to hurry growing up. They do not have to get out and get a job, and be serious all day. It is not exactly true that children don’t grow up fast,
if they are poor; in Denmark it’s not true,
But that is true in many other countries, like the poor countries in the Middle East. I think it is only in the poor countries the statement above is true. For instant was that the case with the girl in the text. She had to get out and help her mother with her work.
I don’t think your muscles are growing faster when you are poor, but I think you mentally will grow lard when you don’t have some secure conditions and surroundings. When you live in a family where the parents can’t afford to have the children to stay home, and do nothing, so you have to grow up fast, so you can get out and make some money to the family. These days, in 2005, children do not have to hurry growing up. They do not have to get out and get a job, and be serious all day. It is not exactly true that children don’t grow up fast,
if they are poor; in Denmark it’s not true,
But that is true in many other countries, like the poor countries in the Middle East. I think it is only in the poor countries the statement above is true. For instant was that the case with the girl in the text. She had to get out and help her mother with her work.
Svar #1
02. november 2005 af Nithelizius (Slettet)
Kan du kort fortælle hvad teskten handler om på dansk, så jeg kan se hvad det handler om :) Men kommer lige med nogle generelle ting.
altså du modsiger dig selv ved at sige at folk nu om dage ikke skal vokse op hurtigt, for senere at sige at det gælder i mellemøsten. Der er nogle mærkelige formuleringer og nogle af sætningerne mangler syntaks, så det ville være en stor hjælp for os begge, hvis behovet er stort nok, til at yde det ekstra arbejde.
En anden ting, mener du at man bliver hurtigere moden, stærkere eller at man bliver psykisk stærkere af at være fattig?
og hvad mener du med sætningen : ... "but I think you mentally will grow lard when you don't have some secure conditions and surroundings"?
altså du modsiger dig selv ved at sige at folk nu om dage ikke skal vokse op hurtigt, for senere at sige at det gælder i mellemøsten. Der er nogle mærkelige formuleringer og nogle af sætningerne mangler syntaks, så det ville være en stor hjælp for os begge, hvis behovet er stort nok, til at yde det ekstra arbejde.
En anden ting, mener du at man bliver hurtigere moden, stærkere eller at man bliver psykisk stærkere af at være fattig?
og hvad mener du med sætningen : ... "but I think you mentally will grow lard when you don't have some secure conditions and surroundings"?
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