ENGELSK RETTELSE, TIL I MORGEN ! HJÆLP

and we were waiting on the airport in 2 hour
 

.... and we were waiting in the airport for two hours 
Eller hvis det er flyet i venter på
... and we were waiting for the airplane for two hours. 
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were in the plain (fly=plane)
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walk allot
-> walk a lot

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Then we finally were at our hotel
Then we finally arrived at our hotel, however it was only momentarily
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We finally returned to our hotel, and I was just about to fall asleep. We bought fast food every single day, because we did not find anything else, and the food on the hotel was very expensive.
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 We did not experienced so much
We did not experience so much...

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Dette er lige dem jeg kunne finde ved en hurtig gennemgang :-)

It was saturday the 19 of October. My mom woke me up at 7.00 o’clock and I was so tired that I could'nt wake up. It was 09.00 o’clock when we drove to Billund. We went to my mom’s friend, who lives in Billund. We stayed there for 30 minutes and then we drove to the airport. It was about 11.00 o’clock when we were waiting on the airport in 2 hours. There was nothing to do. It was one pm/13.00 o’clock when we were in the airplaine. It took about one and a half hour to fly from Billund airport to Edinburgh. When we arrived to Edinburgh we took the bus to Princess Street. It was a long ride, because we also had a lot of walking to do. Then we finally arrived at our hotel, however, not for a long time. We were already going out to shop clothes and Christmas gifts. We saw some good things, we saw a man-wearing kilt who was playing on a bagpipe and it looked silly. However, we also saw bad things, like homeless men, just sitting on the street.  We took a lot of photos, because the place was so beautiful. At last my family and I were so exhausted and just wanted to go back to our hotel. When we finally arrived to our hotel I was just about to fall asleep. In the time we spent there we bought fast food the three whole days, because we did'nt find anything else and the food on the hotel was very expensive. In addition, I felt fat after the trip. We did'nt experience so much; we mostly just shopped Christmas gifts and clothes. We are going next year again, but this time we are going to experience more. 

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