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In the text 3 has Simon Jenkins used many exaggerations and a lot of irony. Already in the title of the text” Another victory for Britain’s insufferable paternalists” shows that he has a sense of humor. When he talk about that, he was a follower of the group, and who wants smoking banned, he used to be ironic.

Another example are when the mentioned the author has also used exaggerations, for instance from line 1-3 where MP’s sounds is compared with monsters. Another example of exaggeration is from line 4-7. But also from line 16-17 and line 22-24. Personality I am don’t agree with Jenkins’ exaggeration, because he cannot see that smoking does not only harm oneself, but also one’s fellow beings. In return, I agree with him where he says that alcohol and drug are not banned, even though they are much worse than smoking.

 The texts “Benefits of smoke ban will be felt at once” is writing by Robin McKie. Robin McKie argues that the smoke ban will instantaneously improve the general public’s health. It is also say that the temporary smoking ban imposed in 2002 in Helena. In addition, Montana has decreased the number of heart attacks with 40 percent compared with earlier years. Robin McKie considers smoking to be a kind off a mental illness, and he mean that, stating that 70 percent of all smokers would be like to “kick the habit”.

“Nature” is an international journal, rates of lung and bronchial cancer declined four times faster in the state California in the rest of USA. It is because of a series of draconian bans.

Robin McKie means that will be illegal to smoke in virtually all enclosed public places and at the workplaces. In addition owners and managers of clubs, disco, clubs ect. can give fine in form of money.

The text “Benefits of smoke ban will be felt at once” has a huge point, about that even thought the smoking ban comes into force, and there will be many smokers and many of early death in coming years because smoking.