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Rette engelsk oversættelse(haster meget)
10. november 2003 af
SP anonym (Slettet)
Hej jeg skal have rettet min oversætttelse, plz hjælp jeg skal aflevere imorgen.
På Dansk:
Næste dag lukker heksen Hans inde i et bur og tvinger Grethe til at arbejde hårdt. Stakkels Grethe vasker, skrubber og gør rent hele dagen. Hun er ulykkelig og græder fordi hun ikke kan hjælpe sin bror, som må blive i buret indtil han er fed nok. Så vil heksen æde ham. Hver dag kommer den gamle heks hen til buret og siger til Hans at han skal stikke fingeren ud så hun kan mærke om han er tyk nok. Men Hans stikker et kyllingeben ud, og heksen, hvis syn er meget dårligt, tror det er hans finger og undrer sig over at han ikke bliver tykkere. Efter nogle uger taber heksen tålmodigheden. Hun kan ikke vente længere. En morgen beder hun Grethe tænde op og hente noget vand. Så siger hun til Grethe at hun skal varme den store ovn op så de kan bage nogle kager. Heksen, som er meget sulten, har til hensigt at spise begge børn. Hun vil koge Hans i den store gryde og bage Grethe i ovnen. Da ovnen er rødglødende, skubber heksen Grethe hen til den og siger til hende at hun skal krybe ind i den for at se om den er varm nok.
Jeg har oversat den til:
Next day the witch locks Hans up in a cage and force Grethe to work hard. Poor Grethe washes, scrubber and do clean every day. She is unhappy and cries because she can’t help her brother, which must stay in the cage until he’s fat enough. Then the witch will eat him. Every day comes the old witch and says to Hans that he shut put her finger out so she can sign about he’s fat enough.
But Hans stick a chicken leg out, and the witch, whose eyesight is very bad, think that it is his finger and wonder why he has not get fat yet.
After some weeks lose the witch hers patience. She can’t wait anymore. A morning she asks Grethe to light the fire and gets some water. So she says to Grethe that she shut heat the big oven up so the can bake some cookies. The witch is very hungry. She intends to eat the children. She wants to boil Hans in the big pot and bake Grethe in the oven.
When the oven is red-hot, the witch pushes Grethe over to it and says to her that she shut huddle in to it to se about is warm enough.
På Dansk:
Næste dag lukker heksen Hans inde i et bur og tvinger Grethe til at arbejde hårdt. Stakkels Grethe vasker, skrubber og gør rent hele dagen. Hun er ulykkelig og græder fordi hun ikke kan hjælpe sin bror, som må blive i buret indtil han er fed nok. Så vil heksen æde ham. Hver dag kommer den gamle heks hen til buret og siger til Hans at han skal stikke fingeren ud så hun kan mærke om han er tyk nok. Men Hans stikker et kyllingeben ud, og heksen, hvis syn er meget dårligt, tror det er hans finger og undrer sig over at han ikke bliver tykkere. Efter nogle uger taber heksen tålmodigheden. Hun kan ikke vente længere. En morgen beder hun Grethe tænde op og hente noget vand. Så siger hun til Grethe at hun skal varme den store ovn op så de kan bage nogle kager. Heksen, som er meget sulten, har til hensigt at spise begge børn. Hun vil koge Hans i den store gryde og bage Grethe i ovnen. Da ovnen er rødglødende, skubber heksen Grethe hen til den og siger til hende at hun skal krybe ind i den for at se om den er varm nok.
Jeg har oversat den til:
Next day the witch locks Hans up in a cage and force Grethe to work hard. Poor Grethe washes, scrubber and do clean every day. She is unhappy and cries because she can’t help her brother, which must stay in the cage until he’s fat enough. Then the witch will eat him. Every day comes the old witch and says to Hans that he shut put her finger out so she can sign about he’s fat enough.
But Hans stick a chicken leg out, and the witch, whose eyesight is very bad, think that it is his finger and wonder why he has not get fat yet.
After some weeks lose the witch hers patience. She can’t wait anymore. A morning she asks Grethe to light the fire and gets some water. So she says to Grethe that she shut heat the big oven up so the can bake some cookies. The witch is very hungry. She intends to eat the children. She wants to boil Hans in the big pot and bake Grethe in the oven.
When the oven is red-hot, the witch pushes Grethe over to it and says to her that she shut huddle in to it to se about is warm enough.
Svar #1
10. november 2003 af SP anonym (Slettet)
Rettet de allerværste fejl. Du får sgu nok ikke tretten for det, men på den anden side, er det bedre end før!
Next day the witch locks Hans up in a cage and forces Grethe to work hard. Poor Grethe washes, scrubs and does cleaning all day. She is unhappy and cries because she can’t help her brother, who has to stay in the cage until he’s fat enough. Then the witch will eat him. Every day the old witch comes to the cage and tells Hans to put his finger out, so she can tell if he’s fat enough.
But Hans puts out a chicken leg, and the witch, whose eyesight is very poor, thinks that it is his finger and wonders why he doesn't get any fatter.
After some weeks the witch loses her patience. She can’t wait anymore. One morning she asks Grethe to light the fire and get some water. So she tells Grethe to heat up the big oven so they can bake some cookies. The witch, who is very hungry, intends to eat both the children. She wants to boil Hans in the big pot and bake Grethe in the oven.
When the oven is red-hot, the witch pushes Grethe over to it and says to her that she must climb inside it to see if it is warm enough.
Next day the witch locks Hans up in a cage and forces Grethe to work hard. Poor Grethe washes, scrubs and does cleaning all day. She is unhappy and cries because she can’t help her brother, who has to stay in the cage until he’s fat enough. Then the witch will eat him. Every day the old witch comes to the cage and tells Hans to put his finger out, so she can tell if he’s fat enough.
But Hans puts out a chicken leg, and the witch, whose eyesight is very poor, thinks that it is his finger and wonders why he doesn't get any fatter.
After some weeks the witch loses her patience. She can’t wait anymore. One morning she asks Grethe to light the fire and get some water. So she tells Grethe to heat up the big oven so they can bake some cookies. The witch, who is very hungry, intends to eat both the children. She wants to boil Hans in the big pot and bake Grethe in the oven.
When the oven is red-hot, the witch pushes Grethe over to it and says to her that she must climb inside it to see if it is warm enough.
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