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Det ville være super dejligt, hvis der var en eller flere, der lige gad løbe dette igennem for fejl.. :)

The story is about a young deplorable man named Paul. Ever since his girlfriend, Tammy, left him three weeks ago he has not been doing anything else than listen to the radio and sprawl on the sofa, without having any human contact. That is also, what he is doing when Tammy phones him one day. She wants to meet him, but she has an ultimatum - if he is not there on time, as he usually not is, she never wants to see him again.
Paul is excited about the appointment and he truly wants to see Tammy. Unfortunately, he has a very unlucky day, as the train he goes by makes a not scheduled stop, which causes that he misses his appointment with Tammy. He wanders the streets for a while and decides to go back home. On his way on the train, the inspector wants to see Paul’s ticket. He cannot find it, but he refuses to pay the penalty fare, as the inspector commands him to. Instead, Paul gets very angry with him and is dragged of the train and handed to the Police, who finds the ticket and sends him home. At home, Paul is as pitiful as always, and he decides to end the day with a bottle of vodka.