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In these times leaning 84 per cent of all young Danes English as their foreign language. Other countries are more hesitantly, but English is (bliver talt) and (skrevet) in bigger extent than every other languages (i meget store udstrækning end noget andet sprog).

Business conversations are being (bliver ført) on English; the international language in internationals sporting events is English; scientific articles (bliver) published on English, and ¾ of the Worlds post- and telecommunication (foregår) on English. They must could expressing on English (for at have) contact with other countries, (både for at) promote international trade and scientific progress and to maintain international communication generally. There is (dog) some resistance to the spread of English, as some people see as a threat against the smaller language.