Rettelse af et engelsk tekststykke om det britiske imperium

Hej!
Jeg ville høre om, der lige var nogle som ville hjælpe mig med at kigge dette tekststykke efter. Om der er nogle fejl? er det forståligt? mangler der noget? osv.
Det er et udsnit fra min SSO om det britiske imperium i engelsk.
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According to Lenin’s theory, imperialism is a time where capitalisms free trade is substituted with its contrast, namely capitalistic monopoly. This free trade creates big industry, and with it bigger companies, which out compete smaller companies. And with it, follows a monopoly out of the free trade, because there will be a concentration of production a capital with the big companies. The monopoly is the transition to it’s highest state, capitalistic imperialism.

Financial capitalism is created from imperialism. The financial capital is a merger between bank capital and industrial capitalism. In the beginning the industry borrowed money from the bank to be able to start-up; they gradually gained a surplus which they invested in the bank. Afterwards the surplus became bigger and bigger, and therefore the capital was placed in the colonies, where they, like in the bank, could collect interest. This export of capital, is shown to be much better business then the export of goods, like Lenin said is a very prominent significance of the imperialism.