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kort rettelse søges..
19. april 2006 af
figaro8 (Slettet)
Nogen der lige vil rette evt grammatiske fejl i det her. Den er skrevet i Nutid hvilket er meningen, da det skal virke lidt tænke-tale agitgt.
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My perfect day
I wake up, and the first thing I can feel, is the bright sun shining in my face. I leave the bed, and walk over to the nearby balcony, I step up, and I really get the feeling of, that I am landed in paradise, my! Paradise. The next thing I do, is to walk down on the fantastic beach, I from the good view on the balcony had spotted. On the way down there, I grab an apple, Which I eat while I’m just standing, and enjoying the beautiful beach with the clean and soft sand, together with the clear blue water, as the likewise blue sky. I be in Spain, in a coast city named Malaga. A city whose history is very interesting, and culture, plus that the lifestyle down here is just designed after my personality. When I stand here, I want to equalize one of my biggest whishes and dreams for long time, namely to dive. Diving has always been fascinating to me, because of it’s glamour and beautifully. To dive with beautiful fish in all sizes, in a crystal clear blue water, most be fantastic. So why not doing it, that’s why I’ll go the local diving club right now, arrange a trip out on the deep water, where the unknown is just waiting for me, under the smooth sea surface. After talking with some of the more professional divers, in the local area, I have complete to arrange a trip today, which I hope will be funny, and that it is possible for me, to grab the real diving spirit to give me the rush I need, to lifted out my big expectations.
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My perfect day
I wake up, and the first thing I can feel, is the bright sun shining in my face. I leave the bed, and walk over to the nearby balcony, I step up, and I really get the feeling of, that I am landed in paradise, my! Paradise. The next thing I do, is to walk down on the fantastic beach, I from the good view on the balcony had spotted. On the way down there, I grab an apple, Which I eat while I’m just standing, and enjoying the beautiful beach with the clean and soft sand, together with the clear blue water, as the likewise blue sky. I be in Spain, in a coast city named Malaga. A city whose history is very interesting, and culture, plus that the lifestyle down here is just designed after my personality. When I stand here, I want to equalize one of my biggest whishes and dreams for long time, namely to dive. Diving has always been fascinating to me, because of it’s glamour and beautifully. To dive with beautiful fish in all sizes, in a crystal clear blue water, most be fantastic. So why not doing it, that’s why I’ll go the local diving club right now, arrange a trip out on the deep water, where the unknown is just waiting for me, under the smooth sea surface. After talking with some of the more professional divers, in the local area, I have complete to arrange a trip today, which I hope will be funny, and that it is possible for me, to grab the real diving spirit to give me the rush I need, to lifted out my big expectations.
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19. april 2006 af Bunjo (Slettet)
My perfect day
I wake up, and the first thing I feel, is the bright sunshine in my face. I leave the bed, and walk to the nearby balcony, I step up, and I really get the feeling , that I am landed in paradise, my Paradise. The next thing I do, is to walk down to the fantastic beach, I had spotted from the good view from the balcony. On my way down there, I grab an apple, which I eat while I stand and enjoy the beautiful beach with the clean and soft sand, together with the clear blue water, as the likewise blue sky. I am in Spain, in a seaside town named Malaga. A town whose history is very interesting, and culture, plus that the lifestyle down here is just designed to my personality. When I stand here, I want to carry out one of my biggest wishes and dreams through a long time, that is to dive. Diving has always been fascinating me, because of it’s glamour and beautiness. To dive with beautiful fishes in all sizes, in crystal clear blue water, must be fantastic. So why not do it, that is why I will go the local diving club right now, arrange a trip out on the deep water, where the unknown is just waiting for me under the smooth sea surface. After talking with some of the more professional divers, in the local area,
"I have completed to arrange a trip today, which I hope will be funny, and that it is possible for me, to grab the real diving spirit to give me the rush I need, to lifted out my big expectations." Hele den her sætning skal du lige forsøge at gøre mere simpel - ellers bliver den for svær for dig at oversætte. Skriv nogle kortere sætninger
I wake up, and the first thing I feel, is the bright sunshine in my face. I leave the bed, and walk to the nearby balcony, I step up, and I really get the feeling , that I am landed in paradise, my Paradise. The next thing I do, is to walk down to the fantastic beach, I had spotted from the good view from the balcony. On my way down there, I grab an apple, which I eat while I stand and enjoy the beautiful beach with the clean and soft sand, together with the clear blue water, as the likewise blue sky. I am in Spain, in a seaside town named Malaga. A town whose history is very interesting, and culture, plus that the lifestyle down here is just designed to my personality. When I stand here, I want to carry out one of my biggest wishes and dreams through a long time, that is to dive. Diving has always been fascinating me, because of it’s glamour and beautiness. To dive with beautiful fishes in all sizes, in crystal clear blue water, must be fantastic. So why not do it, that is why I will go the local diving club right now, arrange a trip out on the deep water, where the unknown is just waiting for me under the smooth sea surface. After talking with some of the more professional divers, in the local area,
"I have completed to arrange a trip today, which I hope will be funny, and that it is possible for me, to grab the real diving spirit to give me the rush I need, to lifted out my big expectations." Hele den her sætning skal du lige forsøge at gøre mere simpel - ellers bliver den for svær for dig at oversætte. Skriv nogle kortere sætninger
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