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28. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)
Det ville være en STORE glæde hvis der var en der ville rette disse sætninger:-)
(Korrekte sætninger, og de steder der står med STORT, på dansk, betyder at jeg ikke kunne oversætte det)

1) Mr. Elliot(Jackie, father) - striker:
Billy and his father don't have a good relationship at all.
And specialy not in the starting, when he founds out that Billy want's to be a ballet dancer.
But it changes I LØBET AF FILMEN.
Their have a very well dad and son relationship in the ending.
Mr. Elliot is a striker.

2) Tony(Billy's older brother) - striker:
Tony and Billy don't neiter have a good relationship.
Tony is for the most very angry on him, and specialy when Billy hear his music: "I love to boogie."
Tony react with freight, when Billy tells him about his drem.
Tony is also a striker.
3) Michael(Billy's best friend):
Billy and Michael has a relationship like very good friends.
But unfortunately Michael is gay.
But it dosn't effect there friendship.
Michael has no problem with Billy and his dream. He accturly like, that he goes to ballet.
4) The little girl.
Billy dosn't realy know her.
He just see her standing beside the wall, and looking on him. (Han ser hende bare stå ved siden af muren, og kigger på ham)
5) Grandmother.
Billy's grandmother don't have any problems with Billy dream.
She accturly wan't him to be a ballet dancer.
6) Mrs. Wilkinson(Ballet teacher) - middleclass:
Mrs. Wilkinson has a very good relation to Billy, she sees a naturaltallent in Billy, and it was TROSALT her hwo did Billys dream come true.
7) Debbie(Mrs. Wilkinsons daughter) - middleclass:
Billy has a good relationship to Debbie. Their flirted a little bit.
Debbie don't have any problem with Billy's dream, she accturly also wan't him to be a balletdancer.

Hvad hedder minearbjeder på engelsk?
- Kunne ikke lige finde det i ordbogen?

Svar #1
28. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Sætter det lige op så man kan læse det:

1) Mr. Elliot(Jackie, father) - striker:
Billy and his father don't have a good relationship at all.
And specialy not in the starting, when he founds out that Billy want's to be a ballet dancer.
But it changes I LØBET AF FILMEN.
Their have a very well dad and son relationship in the ending.
Mr. Elliot is a striker.

2) Tony(Billy's older brother) - striker:
Tony and Billy don't neiter have a good relationship.
Tony is for the most very angry on him, and specialy when Billy hear his music: "I love to boogie."
Tony react with freight, when Billy tells him about his drem.
Tony is also a striker.

3) Michael(Billy's best friend):
Billy and Michael has a relationship like very good friends.
But unfortunately Michael is gay.
But it dosn't effect there friendship.
Michael has no problem with Billy and his dream. He accturly like, that he goes to ballet.

4) The little girl.
Billy dosn't realy know her.
He just see her standing beside the wall, and looking on him. (Han ser hende bare stå ved siden af muren, og kigger på ham)
5) Grandmother.
Billy's grandmother don't have any problems with Billy dream.
She accturly wan't him to be a ballet dancer.

6) Mrs. Wilkinson(Ballet teacher) - middleclass:
Mrs. Wilkinson has a very good relation to Billy, she sees a naturaltallent in Billy, and it was TROSALT her hwo did Billys dream come true.

7) Debbie(Mrs. Wilkinsons daughter) - middleclass:
Billy has a good relationship to Debbie. Their flirted a little bit.
Debbie don't have any problem with Billy's dream, she accturly also wan't him to be a balletdancer

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Svar #2
28. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

Mr. Elliot(Jackie, father) - striker:
Billy and his father don't have a good relationship at all.
And exspecially not in the begining, when it went clear to Billy that he wanted to be a ballet dancer.
But it changes running the film.
They have a very good dad and son relationship at last.
Mr. Elliot is a striker.

måske

Svar #3
28. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Det lyder fint :-)
Tak.

Er der andre, der vil rette resten?

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Svar #4
28. maj 2006 af mils (Slettet)

1) Mr. Elliot(Jackie, father) - striker:
Billy and his father do not have a good relationship at all.
Especially in the beginning, when he finds out that Billy wants to become a ballet dancer.
This, however, changes throughout the movie and by the end they have a great father and son relationship with each other.
Mr. Elliot is a striker.

2) Tony(Billy's older brother) - striker:
Tony and Billy do not have a good relationship either.
Tony is usually angry with him, especially when Billy listens to his music: "I love to boogie."
Tony reacts with fear, when Billy tells him about his future dream.
Tony is a striker too.

3) Michael(Billy's best friend):
Billy and Michael are best friends with each other.
Unfortunately Michael is gay; however,this does not effect their friendship.
Michael do not have a problem at all with Billy's dream. He acctually likes the fact of his friend doing ballet.

4) The little girl.
Billy does not really know her.
He just sees her standing next to the wall, looking at him.

5) Grandmother.
Billy's grandmother does not have a problem with Billy's dream.
She actually wants him to become a ballet dancer.

6) Mrs. Wilkinson(Ballet teacher) - middleclass:
Mrs. Wilkinson has a great relationship to Billy. She sees a natual tallent in the boy, and after all it was her who made Billy's dream come true.

7) Debbie(Mrs. Wilkinson's daughter) - middleclass:
Billy has a great relationship with Debbie. Their flirt a bit.
Debbie does not have a problem with Billy's dream, she actually wants him to become a balletdancer too.

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Svar #5
28. maj 2006 af USyay (Slettet)

no offense, men jeg foreslår at du kigger lidt nærmere i din orgdbog før du smider det herind:

i løbet af kan du f.eks slå op

in changes during the movie

# 2: man kan ikke sige running the film - det er fordansket sprog!

Billy and his father do not(du må ikke trække sammen skriftlig) have a good relationship at all. Especially not in the beginning when he finds out that Billy wants to be a ballet dancer. In the end of the story the relationship between father and son turns out well.

Tony and Billy do not have a good relationship either. Tony is mostly very angry with him, and especially when Billy hears his music...
Tony reacts frighently when Billy tells him about his dream.

Billy and Michael are very good friendshvorfor ikke gøre det så simpelt?), unfortunately Michael is gay. However, it does not have an impact on their friendship. Michael does not have a problem with Billy or his dream.
Actually, he likes that he is a ballet dancer.

Generelt: analyser dine sætninger - grundled og udsagnsled.
- Billy's grand mothers does not
- flertal: do not, want(intet s)
- ental: does not, wants(+ -s

-når du laver skriftlig arbejde må du ikke trække sammen ex. don't, hasn't

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Svar #6
28. maj 2006 af USyay (Slettet)

skal self stå: it changes during...

Svar #7
28. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Nåårh, på den måde..
Tak, til jer begge :-)

Svar #8
28. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Så er de rettet(et sidste kig, før jeg skriver det ned?)

1) Mr. Elliot(Jackie, father) - striker:
Billy and his father do not have a good relationship at all.
Especially not in the beginning when he finds out that Billy wants to be a ballet dancer. In the end of the story the relationship between father and son turns out well.
Mr. Elliot is a striker.

2) Tony(Billy's older brother) - striker:
Tony and Billy do not have a good relationship either.
Tony is usually angry with him, especially when Billy hears his music "I love to boogie."
Tony reacts with fear, when Billy tells him about his dream.
Tony is a striker too.

3) Michael(Billy's best friend):
Billy and Michael are best friends.
Unfortunately Michael is gay; however, this does not effect their friendship.
Michael do not have a problem at all with Billy's dream. He acctually likes the fact of his friend doing ballet.

4) The little girl.
Billy does not really know her.
He just sees her standing next to the wall, looking at him.

5) Grandmother.
Billys grandmoter does not have a problem with Billys dream.
She actually wants him to become a ballet dancer.

6) Mrs. Wilkinson(Ballet teacher) - middleclass:
Mrs. Wilkinson has a great relationship to Billy. She sees a nutual tallent in the boy, and after all it was her who made Billys dream come true.

7) Debbie(Mrs. Wilkinsons daughter) middleclass:
Billy has a good relationship with Debbie. Their flirt a bit, and have a good time togeter.
Debbie does not have a problem with Billys dream, actually she wants him to become a balletdancer too.


Svar #9
28. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

- Det ville være dejligt :-)

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Svar #10
29. maj 2006 af F.U.B.A.R. (Slettet)

Nothing points to Michael being homosexual whilst he was a child, but more to the point he was a transvestite...

The teacher may pick up on this:
"Unfortunately Michael is gay"
I'm as straight as they come, but maybe the teacher would wish you to explain why you think being homosexual is unfortunate?

Note:
There: Over there/There are/is
Their: belonging to...It is their day off/Their car

Lisa, try to go through the text as you have a lot of spelling mistakes.

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Svar #11
29. maj 2006 af F.U.B.A.R. (Slettet)

Lisa

"It changes I LØBET AF FILMEN"
"It changes during the film"

Billy and his father does not have a good relationship...

I disagree, if anything Billy is loved very much by his father.

"especialy when he when he finds out that Billy want's to be a ballet dancer"

Its more of a shock to Billy's father. Ballet is a for girls. Boxing, wrestling, thats for boys, but ballet.... BALLET BILLY!!!!

Svar #12
29. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Hmm.. FUBAR ..
What do you mean with you're message #10?

I understand a bit, but can you plz, translate it to danish?

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