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please..hjælp til rette af en indledning på engelsk.
15. februar 2004 af
suzie (Slettet)
kan i ikke lige se på den efter fejl.jeg ved nu heller ikke, om det dur til en indlening.synes i den er god??
What are you thinking at, when you hear about a young girl there works for some elderly people and when she works like a slave every day for take care of them. What are you thinking at when you hear that she loves her job?? In this essay, you will hear about her relationship with her patients and her thoughts about her job as a nurse.
What are you thinking at, when you hear about a young girl there works for some elderly people and when she works like a slave every day for take care of them. What are you thinking at when you hear that she loves her job?? In this essay, you will hear about her relationship with her patients and her thoughts about her job as a nurse.
Svar #1
15. februar 2004 af Slacz Maci (Slettet)
Well, lige de fejl jeg umiddelbart kunne finde:
..about a young girl _who_ works for (det er en person, derfor who)
...and when she works like a slave every day for take care of them
Den der er der et eller andet galt med.. When skal højst sandsynligt væk, hvad er det du prøver at sige ? Og så skal det være _to_ take care of them :)
..about a young girl _who_ works for (det er en person, derfor who)
...and when she works like a slave every day for take care of them
Den der er der et eller andet galt med.. When skal højst sandsynligt væk, hvad er det du prøver at sige ? Og så skal det være _to_ take care of them :)
Svar #2
15. februar 2004 af Aurica (Slettet)
Samme som Slacz + det hedder ikke "thinking at", bare "thinking".
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