hjælp til rettelse af engelsk..

Kom med dit bud først, vi laver ikke dine lektier. (Ikke uden betaling ihvertfald ;) )

jeg tror det er det hun har gjort.. at hun bare vil have en rettelse af det skrevne..

ja,jeg il jo bare have at der er nogen der vil rtte de grammatiske fejl

Will fells in love on New Year’s Eve.
The girl he falls in love with called Rachel. They meet each other on New Years Eve party.
Will had never wanted to fell in love before. Rachel is an intelligent, beautiful and single woman. She has a child together with her ex but she hates her ex. Will thinks that Rachel only fell in love with him, because he looks good.
Will and Rachel talks about Robert.
Rachel asks Will about Robert. Will wants to say that he helped Robert with the music in his last film, and they sometimes talk together. But he cannot say it. He says, that he buys dopes of him long time ago. Robert was a dope dealer, before he became a television producer. Will was going out with one of Roberts friends and Robert sold some dopes to his mates. Will buys also some dopes of him.
The most interesting thing he realized about his life was Marcus.
When they were at dinner together, Will things about something interested in his life, that he could tell Rachel. But the most interested thing he realized in his life was Marcus. They started to talk about Marcus. Will tells her that he never lived with Marcus` mother, Fiona. And he never intended to live with her in the future.
At midnight they kissed each other.
Will and Rachel kiss each other and arrange to meet again.

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