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When the only thing you believe in fails your hope vanishes, probably as it did to Mr. Vello // did it to, eller did with Mr. Vello?
have in any way shown that they posses these skills to Mr. Vello. // have in any way shown to Mr. Vello that the posses these skills??
Fein doesn't realize until after many years that he was indirectly the factor that killed Mr. Vello and it haunts him in his dreams that he could be so evil in heart, and without any reason could destroy a man.
but when a whole class and in the end the Indian Army, which Mr. Vello puts his trust in, goes against him, it's impossible for him to handle
but also the fact that he fought against some values which are important for our society in order to make it work
The employees' personalities play an increasingly bigger role for the companies
and that you not only seek for employment for the sake of the money.
Tark :)
Svar #1
29. februar 2004 af Fingersen (Slettet)
Svar #2
29. februar 2004 af Slacz Maci (Slettet)
Svar #3
29. februar 2004 af Slacz Maci (Slettet)
Svar #4
29. februar 2004 af Fingersen (Slettet)
Skriv dog sætningen sådanne her:
When the only thing you believe in fails, your hope probably vanishes as it...
2: Hedder sådan her:
have in any way shown Mr. Vello that they possess these skill.
3: skill doesn't af. Skrivesprog jo. Evil in heart = evil at heart, eller bare evil. Kunne godt formuleres lidt om. Er meget lang og lidt uoverskuelig.
4: Kongruens. Bare Mr. Vello trusts. Skil it's ad. impossible for him to handle.
5: Lidt svær at se. Kunne godt tænke mig helheden. Ellers ingen fejl.
6: Kunne måske godt slette the foran companies. Men behøves ikke.
7: slet for foran seek. For the sake = because er bedre.
MVH
Fingersen
Må jeg ikke se hele stilen. Få et lidt større overblik over nogle af dine formuleringer. Mens ellers meget fint!
Svar #5
29. februar 2004 af james bond (Slettet)
Svar #7
01. marts 2004 af Slacz Maci (Slettet)
Jeg poster ikke hele stilen, udover det faktum at den er laaaaang, så vil jeg bare gerne kun hjælpes med de ting jeg synes jeg har fejl i. Self har jeg fejl over det hele i resten også, men dem må jeg ligesom selv lærer af :)
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