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04. februar 2007 af
graci (Slettet)
Halløjsa, nogle der vil kigge min engelsk opgave igennem?
In the beginning of the story the mother likes the way Michael looks like. About him she says, “He has the kind of profile I’ve seen on antique coins, and he moves like a dancer – a slow-motion version of a dancer – lithe and muscled and graceful.” (Lines 12-15) Here we get the impression that she likes his attitude and at the same time she likes his way of moving and his attractive appearance. Later in the story the mother gets insecure about Michael being the right one for her daughter. She doesn’t like the effect Michael has for her daughter. Inside the cinema Zoe has to describe the images for him, which annoys the mother in the beginning, but later she realizes that she is proud of her being independent and patient.
In the beginning of the story the mother likes the way Michael looks like. About him she says, “He has the kind of profile I’ve seen on antique coins, and he moves like a dancer – a slow-motion version of a dancer – lithe and muscled and graceful.” (Lines 12-15) Here we get the impression that she likes his attitude and at the same time she likes his way of moving and his attractive appearance. Later in the story the mother gets insecure about Michael being the right one for her daughter. She doesn’t like the effect Michael has for her daughter. Inside the cinema Zoe has to describe the images for him, which annoys the mother in the beginning, but later she realizes that she is proud of her being independent and patient.
Svar #1
04. februar 2007 af chrisserand (Slettet)
God eftermiddag. Jeg har rettet lidt i din opgave, blandt andet mht. ordstilling og så har jeg prøvet at variere det lidt mere - håber du kan bruge det:)
In the beginning of the story the mother likes the way Michael looks. She says about him, “He has the kind of profile I’ve seen on antique coins, and he moves like a dancer – a slow-motion version of a dancer – lithe and muscled and graceful.” (Lines 12-15). From this quote we get the impression, that she likes his attitude, and at the same time she likes his way of moving and his attractive appearance. Later in the story the mother gets insecure. She is in doubts about whether Michael is the right one for her daughter or not. She doesn’t like the effect Michael has on her daughter.
Inside the cinema Zoe has to describe the images for him, which annoys the mother in the beginning, but later she realizes, that she is proud of Zoe - and her independence and patience (with Michael).
In the beginning of the story the mother likes the way Michael looks. She says about him, “He has the kind of profile I’ve seen on antique coins, and he moves like a dancer – a slow-motion version of a dancer – lithe and muscled and graceful.” (Lines 12-15). From this quote we get the impression, that she likes his attitude, and at the same time she likes his way of moving and his attractive appearance. Later in the story the mother gets insecure. She is in doubts about whether Michael is the right one for her daughter or not. She doesn’t like the effect Michael has on her daughter.
Inside the cinema Zoe has to describe the images for him, which annoys the mother in the beginning, but later she realizes, that she is proud of Zoe - and her independence and patience (with Michael).
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