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14. april 2007 af
susa (Slettet)
er helt vild elendig til engelsk..
så er der nogen der gider rette denne tekst?
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In our English lesson, we had worked with the subject “peace“.
We all choiced a story or a poem and then we made our peace project special with making poems, drawings, articles, interviews etc.
In the period we had worked with the peace subject, the atmosphere was really exiting and nice.
There was a really good communication between us, we helped each others, and we all did our best to make our peace project successfully.
We practiced to present the project. In info we present each our project, in our present, we should give a summary of the story or poem we had choice and then tell what the message was in the story or poem, and we should give our opinion about peace today and how we can spread peace, but in the whole we all had made a fantastic project about peace.
And the important ting is that we learn also things about peace
på forhånd tak
så er der nogen der gider rette denne tekst?
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In our English lesson, we had worked with the subject “peace“.
We all choiced a story or a poem and then we made our peace project special with making poems, drawings, articles, interviews etc.
In the period we had worked with the peace subject, the atmosphere was really exiting and nice.
There was a really good communication between us, we helped each others, and we all did our best to make our peace project successfully.
We practiced to present the project. In info we present each our project, in our present, we should give a summary of the story or poem we had choice and then tell what the message was in the story or poem, and we should give our opinion about peace today and how we can spread peace, but in the whole we all had made a fantastic project about peace.
And the important ting is that we learn also things about peace
på forhånd tak
Svar #1
14. april 2007 af Hoys (Slettet)
In our English lesson, we worked with/STUDIED the subject “peace“.
We all CHOSE a story or a poem and then we made our peace project special BY WRITING poems, MAKING drawings, articles, interviews etc.
DURING the period IN WHICH we worked with the peace subject, the atmosphere was really exiting and nice.
There was a really good communication between us/WE COMMUNICATED WELL, we helped eachother, and we all did our best to make our peace project successful.
We practiced PRESENTING the project. In info we presentED?? each our project(JEG FORSTÅR IKKE SÆTNINGEN), in our presentATION?? (PRESENT = GAVE ELLER AT FREMLÆGGE), we NEEDED TO give/PRESENT a summary of the story or poem we had choSEN and then tell what WE TOUGHT the message was in the story or poem, and THEN give our opinion about peace today and how we can spread peace, but in ALL we had made a fantastic project about peace.(DET GODT NOK EN LANG SÆTNING)
And the important ting is that we also learnED things about peace.
- Det var vist det.
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