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The story “strange things in the corner” is about a boy who’s called Theo Dove.
His real mother put him for adoption when he was over four years old, and now he is thirteen years old and lives with his new dad and mom, and they live in Parramatta.
Theo is a boy that like school, he is active, sharp and stringy.
A day he became sick, he got fever and aches. He didn’t miss the school, because he had holiday.
The fourth week of being sick, his family moved house to Macquarie.
His father Ted is a branch manager for a firm called cheapest Ltd and his mother worked in a children’s crèche.
The family was happy for the new house, and Theo enjoyed seeing them happy.
Theo got it a little bit better, so he decided to go downstairs and look around the place.
He took the stairs down and saw the garden; he hadn’t been outside more than a month.
When he wanted to walk up the stairs again, he remembered that he had promised his mother that he will take the lift. Then when he was in the lift, he saw something in the back corner against the wall. Theo thought it was something that someone had left, but then he saw it pulsing slowly, like a sea anemone, and he realized that it was alive. Theo was chocked.
It was about the size like a medium dog, formless, and it looks like jelly, almost like a grey slug.
It looked in pain and sadness. When the lift stopped Theo stumbled out.
Theo fainted and found him self in the living room. His mother wanted to call the doctor but Theo refused.
He wanted to tells his dad about what he saw, but couldn’t.
Theo couldn’t sleep; he tried to close his eyes, but was too afraid to see it again.
But when he fell asleep he had his usual dreams about his life after he was sent to hilltop homes for children where his new family found him. Theo thought it queer that he couldn’t remember a single thing about his life in hilltop.
Theo had tried to remember his real mom, but she didn’t appear even in his dreams.
He had sometimes asked his family about her, but they said that the only thing they knew about her was that she loved him.
The day after, Theo was fit again but he still thought about the strange thing he saw in the lift.
Theo was back at school again and busy with his homework.
He began to help his father every Sunday in the storage basement under the firm cheapest.
They took stuff in the lift and shifted them down.
Theo should take the stuff down and his dad waited for him down to help.
When Theo was in the lift with the stuff, he saw the strange thing again
As the lift door opened he staggered out and fainted.
His father came to help him and took him to the doctor.
Theo’s appetite was gone and he couldn’t even sleep anymore, if he did then he always dreamed about hilltop.
His father Ted came one day over to him and told him that his doctor referrals to a psychiatrist
First Theo refused, but after when his dad explained him more, he accepted to go.
Theo was feeling hopeful again, he will tell doctor Amby everything.
He told him about a dream he had whit someone crying. But the doctor just gave him pills.
Theo would not go anymore to doctor Amby, and his parents agreed to leave him alone.
Theo began to wondering if it all had something to do with that he is adopted.
It all went bad with Theo, he went down to seventh in class and he was dropped from the football team and he still had problems with sleeping and now he had everyday the dream with someone crying.
One day he went to the lift, he had decided that he will see what it was that had ruined his life and also what it will have.
He took the courage to go in the lift, and when the grey jelly thing was in the corner, Theo asked it what it wanted. A feeling of sadness filled the lift.
The strange thing reads Theo’s thoughts and opened its brown eyes and looked at Theo.
Theo knew that the dream he had was the same feeling like this. When the lift stopped the thing became completely transparent and despaired. He meted his dad and told him everything; he was so happy and began to speak again
And when he went to doctor Amby, he began to like him more and he told him also what had happened, the thing made him remember things he always had in his mind but that were blocked.
He could now remember his mom and how much he loved him.