Engelsk
rettelse af grammatiske fejl
29. april 2007 af
chiqqa (Slettet)
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er der nogen der vil rette for grammatiske fejl?
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The story night attack is about an Indian family with a father called Shiva, a mother called Mira and their 4 children. The family has lived in England in fifteen years. All four children are born in England. The father Shiva is a very good man; he just wishes that his four children will get a good life. The family live in the east of London, It is an old part of London where many people are poor and many have no work. When Shiva came to England, he didn’t have enough money. So he got a job, and the only job he could get was to clean the toilets in the airport in London.
Shiva worked very hard, we worked almost all the time, and he worked with this job in over 10 years. After many years he bought an old dirty corner shop, it was under their flat. The khan family all helped in the shop.
Also there the father shiva worked hard. The shop was open all the time. Shiva became popular and he got many nice costumers. And Shiva was really happy because he doesn’t have to clean toilets anymore. But one day Shiva finds a piece of paper beside his letter box.
In the paper there stood: NIGGERS GO HOME. THIS IS A WARNING. Shiva got scared. Only he and his oldest son knew what happened this morning, the rest of the family didn’t know anything. Shiva didn’t called the police, he don’t like trouble so he just hoped it will not replays.
But it got worse every day, he found the windows of the shop smashed and there were mean letters, and one day someone had throw shit in his shop. Were there also was a letter that said: here is your breakfast. Another day someone had cut their clothes that were hanging in the garden. There were always sprayed a Nazi swastika, there were the criminals had lifted the place
Shiva had a nice British friend called Reg he saw what was going on so he tried to help. But after all this, Shiva decides to go to the police. But the policeman he talked with, didn’t care he was reading newspaper and just said go back to your country and seek help there.
So shiva went home and told Reg what happened. Then they went both of them next day to the police station. And the same policeman was sitting again, then he said the same, but when he saw Reg, he said: why are you helping a black idiot like him. But Reg just answered that he like nice people and it doesn’t matter what color of skin they had. Then the policeman’s boss came. They told him what was going on. And the officer said that he will take four of his best policemen, so they could protect Shiva and his family and also arrest the criminals.
It success... The criminals came back and turned fire in the shop.. But the police arrested them.
er der nogen der vil rette for grammatiske fejl?
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The story night attack is about an Indian family with a father called Shiva, a mother called Mira and their 4 children. The family has lived in England in fifteen years. All four children are born in England. The father Shiva is a very good man; he just wishes that his four children will get a good life. The family live in the east of London, It is an old part of London where many people are poor and many have no work. When Shiva came to England, he didn’t have enough money. So he got a job, and the only job he could get was to clean the toilets in the airport in London.
Shiva worked very hard, we worked almost all the time, and he worked with this job in over 10 years. After many years he bought an old dirty corner shop, it was under their flat. The khan family all helped in the shop.
Also there the father shiva worked hard. The shop was open all the time. Shiva became popular and he got many nice costumers. And Shiva was really happy because he doesn’t have to clean toilets anymore. But one day Shiva finds a piece of paper beside his letter box.
In the paper there stood: NIGGERS GO HOME. THIS IS A WARNING. Shiva got scared. Only he and his oldest son knew what happened this morning, the rest of the family didn’t know anything. Shiva didn’t called the police, he don’t like trouble so he just hoped it will not replays.
But it got worse every day, he found the windows of the shop smashed and there were mean letters, and one day someone had throw shit in his shop. Were there also was a letter that said: here is your breakfast. Another day someone had cut their clothes that were hanging in the garden. There were always sprayed a Nazi swastika, there were the criminals had lifted the place
Shiva had a nice British friend called Reg he saw what was going on so he tried to help. But after all this, Shiva decides to go to the police. But the policeman he talked with, didn’t care he was reading newspaper and just said go back to your country and seek help there.
So shiva went home and told Reg what happened. Then they went both of them next day to the police station. And the same policeman was sitting again, then he said the same, but when he saw Reg, he said: why are you helping a black idiot like him. But Reg just answered that he like nice people and it doesn’t matter what color of skin they had. Then the policeman’s boss came. They told him what was going on. And the officer said that he will take four of his best policemen, so they could protect Shiva and his family and also arrest the criminals.
It success... The criminals came back and turned fire in the shop.. But the police arrested them.
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