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rettelse af engelsk tekst..
26. maj 2007 af
Loripa (Slettet)
Er der nogen der vil være mig behjælpelig med at rette denne engelske tekst, ved jeg ikke helt har styr på det, men det var et kæmpe arbejde for mig at skrive teksten, og ønsker mig at det er lidt mere korrekt.
Hilsen
Bente
The god history
I had meet Hans and marie at my first workplaisment wenn i was with a notter care helper
Wenn wie arrive at the door the carehelper says too me the old mann that wie are going too visit is a
Old crazy disgusting mann and take a deep breath because its smells ind his house.
I got nervous for what too expect behind that door one moment i think its this education something for me.
The old mann has open the door and i saw a sad dirty weak 82 years old mann there no trust have in anybody. He was very lonely and he was looking for credit and attentive from other people.
There home was very dirty there was a mess everywhere there was a smell of urine in the whole haus. His wife was a very strong active person the love to drive there car in the nature that was there hole life.now she is in bed and can not tork or giv expression.
There only child has trye to get Hans in a nursing home in jylland and now there are not talking together and there have no other family.
The carehelper coms everyday Marie needs help with many things like woken,washed,dressed and fed. Marie has a cerebral haemorrhage for 2 yers ago. We must also help Hans whit the dishes and the laundry
While i have help marie i think carefully about that i can help hans too be a happy old mann whit care and respect.
Every day hans and i have planning whot too du ind the hause so that ther have a clean house again its tog 3 mdr to clean the house whe have repair there clothes clear the closet and all the laundry a whole rume was fill white laundry. I only had 1½ hour every day too help hans and marie.
Sudden hans startede too wash him self and put new clothes on every day and all the other care helper has said that i have reach the impossible whit this family.
Now hans is a happy old mann and i still visit him one day a week and we still plan what too du ind the hause.
Hilsen
Bente
The god history
I had meet Hans and marie at my first workplaisment wenn i was with a notter care helper
Wenn wie arrive at the door the carehelper says too me the old mann that wie are going too visit is a
Old crazy disgusting mann and take a deep breath because its smells ind his house.
I got nervous for what too expect behind that door one moment i think its this education something for me.
The old mann has open the door and i saw a sad dirty weak 82 years old mann there no trust have in anybody. He was very lonely and he was looking for credit and attentive from other people.
There home was very dirty there was a mess everywhere there was a smell of urine in the whole haus. His wife was a very strong active person the love to drive there car in the nature that was there hole life.now she is in bed and can not tork or giv expression.
There only child has trye to get Hans in a nursing home in jylland and now there are not talking together and there have no other family.
The carehelper coms everyday Marie needs help with many things like woken,washed,dressed and fed. Marie has a cerebral haemorrhage for 2 yers ago. We must also help Hans whit the dishes and the laundry
While i have help marie i think carefully about that i can help hans too be a happy old mann whit care and respect.
Every day hans and i have planning whot too du ind the hause so that ther have a clean house again its tog 3 mdr to clean the house whe have repair there clothes clear the closet and all the laundry a whole rume was fill white laundry. I only had 1½ hour every day too help hans and marie.
Sudden hans startede too wash him self and put new clothes on every day and all the other care helper has said that i have reach the impossible whit this family.
Now hans is a happy old mann and i still visit him one day a week and we still plan what too du ind the hause.
Svar #1
26. maj 2007 af Carin (Slettet)
I had met Hans and marie at my first workplaisment when.
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Svar #2
26. maj 2007 af Occulta (Slettet)
Du skal have ændret din stavekontrol i Word, så den ikke står på TYSK men ENGELSK.
(Eksempler: wenn, mann, du, wie + mange andre!)
(Eksempler: wenn, mann, du, wie + mange andre!)
Svar #3
26. maj 2007 af Loripa (Slettet)
Hejsa Occulta og Carin
Måske hjælper det at fortælle at jeg ikke har nogen baggrund for at kunne så meget engelsk, jeg er på f niveau, så det er absolut en nybegynder i har med at gøre, jeg måtte slå alle ord op i ordbogen også, så som og, jeg...osv. er der nogen af jer der vil rette hele teksten for mig. Hilsen Bente
Måske hjælper det at fortælle at jeg ikke har nogen baggrund for at kunne så meget engelsk, jeg er på f niveau, så det er absolut en nybegynder i har med at gøre, jeg måtte slå alle ord op i ordbogen også, så som og, jeg...osv. er der nogen af jer der vil rette hele teksten for mig. Hilsen Bente
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