Hvad vi DU give for den?

Hej...

Jeg undrede mig sådan lidt over hvad mit engelsk digt var værd. Opgaven er at vi skal skrive et digt om en citron, så er der nogen der kan give en karakter for den?

her er den så...

I closed my eyes
Something in my hand
Round - actually more oval than round
Very soft like cotton
It had a little top. Around the top it was very soft
Just like baby skin
The other side of this thing was very rough. Rough like a stone
The surface was very smooth. Smooth like a skating rink of ice
Maybe an avocado. No, didn't think so
Maybe a mango. No, not a mango
But no, it didn’t smell like a mango or an avocado

A strange smell
But still nice and wonderful
The smell was heavenly and unspeakable
Like I was flying or floating in the sky
A strange feeling .Still I was very comfortable with the smell
Then the feeling of desperation came
What was it?

Opened up my eyes
Shocked of the sight
But I realized why the smell was heavenly, wonderful and strange
It was a lemon!
A yellow lemon!
Unbelievable
This lemon was just perfect
I’ve never seen a lemon like that
It had the perfect size, colour and smell
A blind person would always smell a lemon like this, and buy it
The yellow colour of this lemon was more wonderful, amazing and golden than the sun was
It was shinier than the moonlight
Even more shinier than the sun
It had some green spots on the surface
Not big spots – but it looked very natural
The spots remembered me of the nature. So clean in the colour
The lemon looked very juicy
Tears came down my cheeks
How come?
Because this creature would die some day
I promised myself that I would cry that day!