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Religions' opinions about suicide.
In Islam it isn’t allowed to commit suicide because it’s harem and also because life is a present from God and must be respected!
The Koran says that you are “weak” if you commit or try to commit suicide and then you aren’t a [good?] Muslim and therefore you will go directly to hell when you die.
I don’t know that is correct. [HVAD MENER DU? Fx "I don't know if ir it correct, but..."] But I have heard that in Christianity we have to take care of our bodies because the body is a temple for God.
According to Catholicism it is also a sin to commit suicide, so Islam and Catholicism agree on this subject.
A little problem with Islam is that the Koran is ambiguous and there isn’t a correct translation of the Koran.

det jeg mener at, at jeg ik ved om det er sandt, fordi det er noget jeg har hørt.

HVa mener du med >"I don't know if ir it correct, but..."] :S

Jeg har bare så travlt, at jeg ikke får set, hvor fingrene danser hen over tasterne.

Jeg foreslår:

I don’t know whether it is correct, but I have heard that in Christianity human beings have to take care of our bodies because the body is a temple for God.

Tusind tak for at du overhovedet gad at rette det, selvom du har travlt.
Bukker pænt.