Engelsk stil - rettelse

Hej SP (;
nogle der vil tage et kig på min engelsk stil og rette i det? Så vil jeg blive meget glad.

My grandparents had a farm in Yorkshire, and I really loved staying there in the holidays. Actually I’ve just turned back from a two-week holiday up there. It was really pleasant just to have a break-off from school. I was getting real tired of the teachers, who couldn’t learn me anything. They just didn’t seem to have interest in teaching pupils, but why did they have this job then? I ask myself this question every day. But enough about that. While I stayed in Yorkshire, grandma and I went up to the gorgeous mountains of Yorkshire. It was really beautiful standing on top of the hill and just let your thoughts fly by. She said to me: “Up here the grass really is greener” and I laughed, knowing that many places have the some colour on their lawn. The time had flown away and the sun was leaving the sky, and I was getting ready for the famous Yorkshire pudding and roast beef with potatoes. It was really yummy. Next day, grandpa and I went outside riding on the quads. It was so hilarious, and my stomach was being tied into a knot as we rode over the obstacles. Sometimes I wish I lived out there in the country. But then again, I couldn’t live without the big city environment. That is something I really want to maintain in my daily life. But there is some time again, before I’ve got to move out and stand on my own. Grandma and grandpa was really over flooding with their money, and spent quite a lot on new clothes and souvenirs to me. They always threat me this nice, when I haven’t seen them for relatively long time. But I had it in mind, that was also why I’ve brought two lockage with me, knowing that one would be filled with stuff that had been given to me by my grandparents. One of the days I went to a private school, just to see how it is going to a private school. It was indeed for rich people’s kids, you could tell by the way they dressed and reacted when I spoke to them. But I learned more there on that day, then I’d ever get to learn in my own school back home. That gave me something to think about! But my grandma said to me that I should challenge me more then now, and then I would see improvements. I’ve got to give it a fresh start at school and think more positively about it, then it would be the time of my life!