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Rettelse af et 200 ords resume
19. oktober 2007 af
sukkertrold-xD (Slettet)
Growing up – The Shining Mountain
The article is about a girl name Caroline Wozniacki, she is 11 years old and come from Herfølge. She goes on the Herfølge School in 5. Grade. She is one of the best tennis players in Europe but she can end up being world-famous. She is very ambitious, targeted and determined. She has won a lot of competitions and her trainer Henry Stein is saying that she is a true talent. Her mother name is Anna and she has been a Polish international volleyball player but now she is a lifeguard. Her father name is Piotr and he has been a professional football player and he is now driving his daughter 140 km to Farum Tennis club every day. Caroline Wozniacki started to play tennis with her father and big brother in Køge Tennis club. She is now on the U12 national team and plays a lot of international tournaments. It means that she is traveling a lot and that is very expensively so her father are trying to get some help form Danish tennis association and Team Denmark. But they do not acknowledge elite (udøvere) less than 15 years. The family wants some sponsors, physiotherapist and a sport psychologist.
The article is about a girl name Caroline Wozniacki, she is 11 years old and come from Herfølge. She goes on the Herfølge School in 5. Grade. She is one of the best tennis players in Europe but she can end up being world-famous. She is very ambitious, targeted and determined. She has won a lot of competitions and her trainer Henry Stein is saying that she is a true talent. Her mother name is Anna and she has been a Polish international volleyball player but now she is a lifeguard. Her father name is Piotr and he has been a professional football player and he is now driving his daughter 140 km to Farum Tennis club every day. Caroline Wozniacki started to play tennis with her father and big brother in Køge Tennis club. She is now on the U12 national team and plays a lot of international tournaments. It means that she is traveling a lot and that is very expensively so her father are trying to get some help form Danish tennis association and Team Denmark. But they do not acknowledge elite (udøvere) less than 15 years. The family wants some sponsors, physiotherapist and a sport psychologist.
Svar #1
19. oktober 2007 af Hallooo (Slettet)
Hej. har kigget lidt overfladisk på den. Men har nogle rettelser. //=slettes ()=indsættes
The article is about a girl name(d) Caroline Wozniacki/,/(.) /s/ (S)he is 11 years old and come(s) from Herfølge. She /goes on/ (attends) the Herfølge School in 5. Grade. She is one of the best tennis players in Europe but she can end up being world-famous. She is very ambitious, targeted and determined. She has won /a lot of/ (many) competitions and her trainer Henry Stein /is saying/ (says) that she is a true talent. Her mother('s) name is Anna and she has been a Polish international volleyball player but now she is a lifeguard. Her father name is Piotr and he has been a professional football player and he is now driving his daughter 140 km to Farum Tennis club every day. Caroline Wozniacki started to play tennis with her father and big brother in Køge Tennis club. She is now on the U12 national team and plays a lot of international tournaments. It means that she is traveling a lot and that is very expensive/ly/ so her father are trying to get some help form Danish tennis association and Team Denmark. But they do not acknowledge elite (udøvere) less than 15 years. The family wants some sponsors, physiotherapist and a sport psychologist.
The article is about a girl name(d) Caroline Wozniacki/,/(.) /s/ (S)he is 11 years old and come(s) from Herfølge. She /goes on/ (attends) the Herfølge School in 5. Grade. She is one of the best tennis players in Europe but she can end up being world-famous. She is very ambitious, targeted and determined. She has won /a lot of/ (many) competitions and her trainer Henry Stein /is saying/ (says) that she is a true talent. Her mother('s) name is Anna and she has been a Polish international volleyball player but now she is a lifeguard. Her father name is Piotr and he has been a professional football player and he is now driving his daughter 140 km to Farum Tennis club every day. Caroline Wozniacki started to play tennis with her father and big brother in Køge Tennis club. She is now on the U12 national team and plays a lot of international tournaments. It means that she is traveling a lot and that is very expensive/ly/ so her father are trying to get some help form Danish tennis association and Team Denmark. But they do not acknowledge elite (udøvere) less than 15 years. The family wants some sponsors, physiotherapist and a sport psychologist.
Svar #3
19. oktober 2007 af de_gale (Slettet)
Ved jeg ikke lige, men fik lige øje på noget:
It means that she is traveling a lot and that is very expensive/ly/ so her father //are// (is) trying to get some help //form// (from) Danish Tennis Association (skriv med store forbogstaver) and Team Denmark. But they do not acknowledge elite (udøvere), (who are) less than 15 years (old). The family wants some sponsors, (a) physiotherapist and a sport psychologist.
It means that she is traveling a lot and that is very expensive/ly/ so her father //are// (is) trying to get some help //form// (from) Danish Tennis Association (skriv med store forbogstaver) and Team Denmark. But they do not acknowledge elite (udøvere), (who are) less than 15 years (old). The family wants some sponsors, (a) physiotherapist and a sport psychologist.
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