Engelsk
Engelsk - rettelse!!!
25. oktober 2007 af
LulliexD (Slettet)
Heey allesammen :).
Jeg har skrevet min 1. del af min aflevering ned nu, og håber der nogle her inde der gider kigge på den, mht. bl.a. gramatik, ordstilling etc.
1. Del : Thirteen - Tracy:
1. Explain why you think Tracy begins to steel, take drugs, cut herself etc. in the movie
Thirteen (write a maximum one page, line spacing 1½)
To be a popular teenage girl today you need to ware cool clothes, skip class, take drugs, have a cool body piercing and even steel if you doesn’t have the money. I think Tracy begins to steel, take drugs, etc. in the movie because she wants to be a cool and popular girl. Tracy is tired of be treated as a child, she wants to “hang” out with the popularest (populæreste pige) and the sexiest girl in school – Evie Zamora. Tracy knows that the fastest way to get popular is by allying her self to Evie Zamora, but Evie also treat Tracy like a child, until one day Tracy proves herself by stealing a wallet from a woman, from this moment Tracy become a new best friend. I think she begins to steel, because she wants to change her life – from the responsible girl, who always have her homework ready, and the girl who always does what her mother wants, to the popular girl with boys, sex and rock & roll, but also if we look at Tracy’s family, we can see that they are in a bad economy, Tracy’s mother and father are divorced, and her mother doesn’t earn a lot of money, she works home as a hair stylist, but Tracy’s father also take care of the family by sending a check.
Tracy comes in a bad environment, she does everything the same as Evie does, and she begins to take drugs. She wants to be a tough girl, she wants to be popular, and she wants to have respect.
Tracy is thirteen years old, which means that she’s stepped in the teenage world, this is the years where she’s not longer a kid, but either not yet an adult. One late night Evie sneaks out, excluding Tracy, Tracy is consumed with loneliness, and then she runs out to the bathroom to cut herself.
I think she cut herself because she feels angry, hurt, unwanted or lonely.
- På forhånd mange tak!!! :)
//Louise.
Jeg har skrevet min 1. del af min aflevering ned nu, og håber der nogle her inde der gider kigge på den, mht. bl.a. gramatik, ordstilling etc.
1. Del : Thirteen - Tracy:
1. Explain why you think Tracy begins to steel, take drugs, cut herself etc. in the movie
Thirteen (write a maximum one page, line spacing 1½)
To be a popular teenage girl today you need to ware cool clothes, skip class, take drugs, have a cool body piercing and even steel if you doesn’t have the money. I think Tracy begins to steel, take drugs, etc. in the movie because she wants to be a cool and popular girl. Tracy is tired of be treated as a child, she wants to “hang” out with the popularest (populæreste pige) and the sexiest girl in school – Evie Zamora. Tracy knows that the fastest way to get popular is by allying her self to Evie Zamora, but Evie also treat Tracy like a child, until one day Tracy proves herself by stealing a wallet from a woman, from this moment Tracy become a new best friend. I think she begins to steel, because she wants to change her life – from the responsible girl, who always have her homework ready, and the girl who always does what her mother wants, to the popular girl with boys, sex and rock & roll, but also if we look at Tracy’s family, we can see that they are in a bad economy, Tracy’s mother and father are divorced, and her mother doesn’t earn a lot of money, she works home as a hair stylist, but Tracy’s father also take care of the family by sending a check.
Tracy comes in a bad environment, she does everything the same as Evie does, and she begins to take drugs. She wants to be a tough girl, she wants to be popular, and she wants to have respect.
Tracy is thirteen years old, which means that she’s stepped in the teenage world, this is the years where she’s not longer a kid, but either not yet an adult. One late night Evie sneaks out, excluding Tracy, Tracy is consumed with loneliness, and then she runs out to the bathroom to cut herself.
I think she cut herself because she feels angry, hurt, unwanted or lonely.
- På forhånd mange tak!!! :)
//Louise.
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