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07. november 2007 af niobe (Slettet)
Hej! er der nogen søde væsner, der kunne have lyst til at rette følgende igennem? på forhånde mange tak:)

The nature gives the author something very special, the nature helps him to understand the essential of life, and makes him think even longer, than just to his physically needs. These important thoughts “lives” in sunrise or the ocean, and through these nature-happenings he finds the advanced thoughts which he never would have found without the nature - because of that; Wordsworth sees the nature and human as kind of the same, the nature gives Wordworth and all human beings power, which runs through their bodies, Wordwoth feels that the spirit of nature rolls among everything. Upperset to this way looking at nature is the novel “Yellow”, here fear the main character the nature because he sees the nature as something different and independent that have the power to harm him – he does not regard the nature as an integrated part of himself like Wordsworth does. I a greater perspective Yellow’s look at nature are devastating – if you do not see the nature as a part your self it is much more easy to make a damage at it

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07. november 2007 af MP7 (Slettet)

Jeg mener, men er ikke sikker, at det bare hedder nature (1. linjer begge steder).

Du har vist glem et ord i sidste sætning : "I a greater" ????

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