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Rettelse af stil, m. henblik på udvidet/simpel tid
10. december 2007 af
miss13 (Slettet)
Hej!
Har fået styr på starten, men tænkte på om der var nogle der havde tid til at læse disse linjer igennem og komme med rettelser, gode råd osv..
Kære Jane!
Jeg sidder og laver lektier, mens jeg lytter til noget fed musik i radionen. Min mor sidder altid, at man ikke kan lave lektier og lytte til musik samtidig, men hun ved ikke hvad hun taler om"
Igår havde jeg en fantastisk oplevelse. Som du ved, arbejder jeg, hver eftermiddag i en bagerbutik, og igår kom en af mine venner, Sarah, ind i butikken, mens jeg var ved at betjene en ældre dame...
Oversat:
Dear Jane,
I am sitting and doing homework, while I am listening to some cool music in the radio.
My mom always says that you can’t do homework and listen to music at the same time, but she doesn’t know what she is talking about.
Yesterday I had an amazing experience. I work, as you know, every afternoon in a bakery, and yesterday one of my friends, Sarah, came in to the bakeshop while I was serving an older woman....
Nogen der har råd eller evt. rettelser, så skriv egentlig! tak :D
Har fået styr på starten, men tænkte på om der var nogle der havde tid til at læse disse linjer igennem og komme med rettelser, gode råd osv..
Kære Jane!
Jeg sidder og laver lektier, mens jeg lytter til noget fed musik i radionen. Min mor sidder altid, at man ikke kan lave lektier og lytte til musik samtidig, men hun ved ikke hvad hun taler om"
Igår havde jeg en fantastisk oplevelse. Som du ved, arbejder jeg, hver eftermiddag i en bagerbutik, og igår kom en af mine venner, Sarah, ind i butikken, mens jeg var ved at betjene en ældre dame...
Oversat:
Dear Jane,
I am sitting and doing homework, while I am listening to some cool music in the radio.
My mom always says that you can’t do homework and listen to music at the same time, but she doesn’t know what she is talking about.
Yesterday I had an amazing experience. I work, as you know, every afternoon in a bakery, and yesterday one of my friends, Sarah, came in to the bakeshop while I was serving an older woman....
Nogen der har råd eller evt. rettelser, så skriv egentlig! tak :D
Svar #1
11. december 2007 af OnlyMe07 (Slettet)
Dear Jane,
I am sitting and doing homework while I am listening to music in some cool radio.
My mother always said that you can not do homework and listen to music at the same time, but she does not know what she's talking about.
Yesterday I had an extraordinary experience. I work, as you know, every afternoon in a bakery, and, yesterday, one of my friends, Sarah, came into the bakeshop serving while I was an older woman ....
I am sitting and doing homework while I am listening to music in some cool radio.
My mother always said that you can not do homework and listen to music at the same time, but she does not know what she's talking about.
Yesterday I had an extraordinary experience. I work, as you know, every afternoon in a bakery, and, yesterday, one of my friends, Sarah, came into the bakeshop serving while I was an older woman ....
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