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Rettelse af eng stil! kun 200 ord!!
02. februar 2008 af
kamiilla (Slettet)
Her virkelig brug for noget hjlæp! Er meget dårlig grammatisk, så hvis nogen vil se efter fejl, vil det være super!!
An extract from William Wordsworth’s Lines Composed a Few Miles Above Tintern Abbey shows the view of man versus nature. Since his youth there has been a change not only physique but also in his mind. He has learns to look at nature in a positive way - he appreciate and feel inspirit of nature.
“And I have felt a presence that disturbs me with the joy of elevated thoughts: a sense sublime of something far more deeply interfused”.
By this I think he has found himself in nature and that he gets a meaning with life and he loves this feeling. Everything is so beautiful and good in nature, the sun, air and the blue sky, that it came off on his life and soul.
This extract compared to Yellow it deals with the same feeling about nature. They both describe nature as something good and beautiful and they have been though a change to get this feeling. In the extract he just feels nature and enjoys it opposite Jon who chooses to commit suicide in nature. So it deals with to different ways to be fascinated of nature and how to be together with nature.
Tak :D
An extract from William Wordsworth’s Lines Composed a Few Miles Above Tintern Abbey shows the view of man versus nature. Since his youth there has been a change not only physique but also in his mind. He has learns to look at nature in a positive way - he appreciate and feel inspirit of nature.
“And I have felt a presence that disturbs me with the joy of elevated thoughts: a sense sublime of something far more deeply interfused”.
By this I think he has found himself in nature and that he gets a meaning with life and he loves this feeling. Everything is so beautiful and good in nature, the sun, air and the blue sky, that it came off on his life and soul.
This extract compared to Yellow it deals with the same feeling about nature. They both describe nature as something good and beautiful and they have been though a change to get this feeling. In the extract he just feels nature and enjoys it opposite Jon who chooses to commit suicide in nature. So it deals with to different ways to be fascinated of nature and how to be together with nature.
Tak :D
Svar #2
04. februar 2008 af OnlyMe07 (Slettet)
An excerpt from William Wordsworth's Lines compiled a Few Miles Above Tintern Abbey shows in the opinion of man against nature. Since his youth, there is a change not only physique, but also in his mind. He learns to look at the nature in a positive way - he appreciates inspirit and feel of nature.
"And I felt a presence that disturbs me with the joy of elevated thoughts: a sublime sense of something much more deeply interfused.
By this I think he has found himself in the wilderness and that he gets a sense of the life and he loves this feeling. Everything is so beautiful and good in nature, the sun, the sky and the blue sky, that came out on his life and soul.
To extract the Yellow compared with the same feeling about nature. They describe nature as both a good and beautiful and they are all a change to get this feeling. In the excerpt he feels nature and enjoy the opposite Jon person chooses to commit suicide in the wilderness. So it is about the various ways to be fascinated by nature and how are together with nature.
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