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04. februar 2008 af
frkrosenberg (Slettet)
Global warming
The texts about global warming are from the website www.ilikemusic.com and by Charles Clover & Bruno Waterfield, The Daily Telegraph. Global warming is a big issue because of the all its problems and it has brought famous in the organisations to make attention, because we all have to worry. Especially in countries with rainforests we have to pay more attention and make sure that they can remain as a conservation area.
A lot of different organisations try to help the whole world by bringing out their message to everyone. Everyone has an important stock in the innovation of the global warming. “Global Cool” is one of all this organisations and as one of the involved we hear about, K.T Tunstall, who is a Scottish female singer. “The average person emits around 15 tonnes of CO2 a year and I learned that, though the manufacture and transportation of 500,000 records, my emissions had gone up to around 650 tonnes ,” she says. That’s why she wants to be involved in this project and she’s not the only famous character. Also Josh Hartnett, who is an actor best known in films as “Pearl Harbor” and “Sin City”. He finds the project inspiring and states, “I was living in Minnesota, which is hardly the coolest place in the world, and I was driving around in a Prius and getting funny looks. Now everyone wants one and they can’t get them” .
To help people notice and don’t forget this problem “Global Cool” has other musicians for example “The Doors and Farrell”, who has made the theme song for “Global Cool”, “Woman in the window”, which is a song told by an angels point of view.
It’s not a project with only songs to make attention, but they use a lot of time to talk about their messages. They want to reduce the emissions of CO2 by 10 billion tons over 10 years and they want to make sure that everyone know about this problem by educating regular people to know how to use less power in their everyday lives.
All ready know it’s been easier to do something. On this website, www.global-cool.com average man can see how much energy they use and this support sites help changing the climate immediately, but there is still a lot to be done. More and more climate catastrophes are being seen. People are dying all over the world and these catastrophes have never been seen before. Last summer in Italy people died in the streets because the summer has been too dry. It’s like people aren’t thinking at all. We need the rainforests and even though we keep destroying them. That’s not helping the global warming; indeed we are making it worse for our self and the rest of the world. To help the Earth we need these rainforests. I understand that the poor countries have to destroy the rainforests, because they are the only earnings they have, but there must be other opportunities? In fact, if people keep destroying the rainforests as they use to, the rainforests will be gone in only one generation and it’s a big problem for the countries, where the rainforests are laying.
We have to remember that it’s not only a forest, but some poor people are living in these rainforests and they have no place to go, no food and out of control if they loose this forests. It’s a bigger problem to make them change their standard of living in a flat or something. They are use to get food in these forests and they are living side by side with many different kind of animals. As a normal human of beings we have to find other places to get our medicine. Until now it’s from these forests and we have to find new sources without the rainforests. About fourth of our medicine are from the rainforests.
Fortunately not everyone wants to destroy the rainforests and that’s why we still see places with rainforest, but the development is beginning and we have to worry.
The texts about global warming are from the website www.ilikemusic.com and by Charles Clover & Bruno Waterfield, The Daily Telegraph. Global warming is a big issue because of the all its problems and it has brought famous in the organisations to make attention, because we all have to worry. Especially in countries with rainforests we have to pay more attention and make sure that they can remain as a conservation area.
A lot of different organisations try to help the whole world by bringing out their message to everyone. Everyone has an important stock in the innovation of the global warming. “Global Cool” is one of all this organisations and as one of the involved we hear about, K.T Tunstall, who is a Scottish female singer. “The average person emits around 15 tonnes of CO2 a year and I learned that, though the manufacture and transportation of 500,000 records, my emissions had gone up to around 650 tonnes ,” she says. That’s why she wants to be involved in this project and she’s not the only famous character. Also Josh Hartnett, who is an actor best known in films as “Pearl Harbor” and “Sin City”. He finds the project inspiring and states, “I was living in Minnesota, which is hardly the coolest place in the world, and I was driving around in a Prius and getting funny looks. Now everyone wants one and they can’t get them” .
To help people notice and don’t forget this problem “Global Cool” has other musicians for example “The Doors and Farrell”, who has made the theme song for “Global Cool”, “Woman in the window”, which is a song told by an angels point of view.
It’s not a project with only songs to make attention, but they use a lot of time to talk about their messages. They want to reduce the emissions of CO2 by 10 billion tons over 10 years and they want to make sure that everyone know about this problem by educating regular people to know how to use less power in their everyday lives.
All ready know it’s been easier to do something. On this website, www.global-cool.com average man can see how much energy they use and this support sites help changing the climate immediately, but there is still a lot to be done. More and more climate catastrophes are being seen. People are dying all over the world and these catastrophes have never been seen before. Last summer in Italy people died in the streets because the summer has been too dry. It’s like people aren’t thinking at all. We need the rainforests and even though we keep destroying them. That’s not helping the global warming; indeed we are making it worse for our self and the rest of the world. To help the Earth we need these rainforests. I understand that the poor countries have to destroy the rainforests, because they are the only earnings they have, but there must be other opportunities? In fact, if people keep destroying the rainforests as they use to, the rainforests will be gone in only one generation and it’s a big problem for the countries, where the rainforests are laying.
We have to remember that it’s not only a forest, but some poor people are living in these rainforests and they have no place to go, no food and out of control if they loose this forests. It’s a bigger problem to make them change their standard of living in a flat or something. They are use to get food in these forests and they are living side by side with many different kind of animals. As a normal human of beings we have to find other places to get our medicine. Until now it’s from these forests and we have to find new sources without the rainforests. About fourth of our medicine are from the rainforests.
Fortunately not everyone wants to destroy the rainforests and that’s why we still see places with rainforest, but the development is beginning and we have to worry.
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04. februar 2008 af OnlyMe07 (Slettet)
Global warming
The texts on global warming from the website [link] and Charles Clover & Bruno Waterfield, The Daily Telegraph. Global warming is a major problem, because it of all its problems and it has in the famous organisations to attention, because we all have to make. Especially in countries with rain forests, we must pay more attention and to ensure that they can remain as conservation.
A lot of different organizations are trying to help the whole world by bringing their message to everyone. Everyone has an important contribution to the innovation of the warming of the earth. "Global Cool" is one of these organizations and as one of the actors we hear about, KT Tunstall, a Scottish singer. "The average person emits about 15 tons of CO2 per year, and I learned that although the production and transportation of 500000 records, my emissions had gone to about 650 tonnes," she says. That is the reason why she wants to be involved in this project and it is not the only famous character. Even Josh Hartnett, an actor who is best known in films like 'Pearl Harbor' and 'Sin City'. He thinks the project inspiring and declares: "I was living in Minnesota, which hardly the coolest place in the world, and I was driving in a Prius and get funny looks. Now everyone wants one and they can not do it".
In order to help people notice and do not forget this problem "Global Cool" has other musicians for example, "The Doors and Farrell, which has the theme song for" Global Cool "," Woman in the Window ", a song tells a viewpoint angels .
It is not a project with only numbers to create attention, but they use a lot of time to talk about their messages. They want the reduction of CO2 emissions by 10 billion tons over 10 years and they want to make sure that everyone knows about this problem by educating people regularly to know how the use of less energy in their daily lives.
Soon knows it is easier to do something. On this website [link] average man can see how much energy they use and support these sites will help change the climate immediately, but there is still much to do. More and more climate disasters. People are dying all over the world and these disasters have never seen. Last summer in Italy people died in the streets because the summer was too dry. It is as if people do not think of everything. We need the rain and even if we destroy them. That is not helping the global warming, we are actually making it worse for ourselves and the rest of the world. To help the Earth we need this rain. I understand that the poor countries have to destroy the rain, because they are the only income, but there are other possibilities? In fact, if people keep destroying the rain as they used to, the rain will be done in just a generation and it is a big problem for the countries where the rain.
We must not forget that it is not just a forest, but a number of poor people in this rain, and they have no place to go, no food and the control, if they separate from these forests. It is a bigger problem to make them change their living in a flat or something. They are used for food in these forests and they live side by side, with many different types of animals. As one of the normal human beings, we have to find other places to get our medicine. So far it is from these forests and we have to find new sources without the rain. Approximately one quarter of our medicine from the rain.
Fortunately, not everyone wants to destroy the rainforests and that is why we are still places with rain, but development is beginning and we have to worry.
The texts on global warming from the website [link] and Charles Clover & Bruno Waterfield, The Daily Telegraph. Global warming is a major problem, because it of all its problems and it has in the famous organisations to attention, because we all have to make. Especially in countries with rain forests, we must pay more attention and to ensure that they can remain as conservation.
A lot of different organizations are trying to help the whole world by bringing their message to everyone. Everyone has an important contribution to the innovation of the warming of the earth. "Global Cool" is one of these organizations and as one of the actors we hear about, KT Tunstall, a Scottish singer. "The average person emits about 15 tons of CO2 per year, and I learned that although the production and transportation of 500000 records, my emissions had gone to about 650 tonnes," she says. That is the reason why she wants to be involved in this project and it is not the only famous character. Even Josh Hartnett, an actor who is best known in films like 'Pearl Harbor' and 'Sin City'. He thinks the project inspiring and declares: "I was living in Minnesota, which hardly the coolest place in the world, and I was driving in a Prius and get funny looks. Now everyone wants one and they can not do it".
In order to help people notice and do not forget this problem "Global Cool" has other musicians for example, "The Doors and Farrell, which has the theme song for" Global Cool "," Woman in the Window ", a song tells a viewpoint angels .
It is not a project with only numbers to create attention, but they use a lot of time to talk about their messages. They want the reduction of CO2 emissions by 10 billion tons over 10 years and they want to make sure that everyone knows about this problem by educating people regularly to know how the use of less energy in their daily lives.
Soon knows it is easier to do something. On this website [link] average man can see how much energy they use and support these sites will help change the climate immediately, but there is still much to do. More and more climate disasters. People are dying all over the world and these disasters have never seen. Last summer in Italy people died in the streets because the summer was too dry. It is as if people do not think of everything. We need the rain and even if we destroy them. That is not helping the global warming, we are actually making it worse for ourselves and the rest of the world. To help the Earth we need this rain. I understand that the poor countries have to destroy the rain, because they are the only income, but there are other possibilities? In fact, if people keep destroying the rain as they used to, the rain will be done in just a generation and it is a big problem for the countries where the rain.
We must not forget that it is not just a forest, but a number of poor people in this rain, and they have no place to go, no food and the control, if they separate from these forests. It is a bigger problem to make them change their living in a flat or something. They are used for food in these forests and they live side by side, with many different types of animals. As one of the normal human beings, we have to find other places to get our medicine. So far it is from these forests and we have to find new sources without the rain. Approximately one quarter of our medicine from the rain.
Fortunately, not everyone wants to destroy the rainforests and that is why we are still places with rain, but development is beginning and we have to worry.
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